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Eclipse

heaven holds its breath moon between the sun and earth a solar e c l I p s e

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Date: 5/15/2025 2:42:00 PM
SP, cute indeed. I've been to three total eclipses in my life so far. The period of totality is short and quite amazing. It does create a great deal of excitement. Smiles indeed, sir!!!
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Date: 5/12/2025 12:58:00 AM
A solar eclipse how beautifully youv described here! Is this your first hiku after a long time? I think you should do more for sure as yours flow so well and i love the word arrangement and how youv presented it , especially love the line "heaven holds its breath" how breathtaking! Just stunning opening line for this! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/11/2025 4:18:00 PM
A beautiful natural phenomenon. Your haiku does it justice
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Date: 5/11/2025 3:44:00 PM
so much of reality we do not see....it be 'eclipsed' by what we can percieve....len
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Date: 5/11/2025 2:50:00 PM
I see the eclipse, SP! ty for this Mother's Day contribution, i certainly enjoyed it! ~ Xhugs
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Date: 5/11/2025 2:42:00 PM
A perfect capture of this moment - beautiful
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