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Eclipse

When the moon obscures the sun close your eyes and don't look up Let your circadian rhythm speak to your heart, and do not fear for the sun will reappear, soon.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/8/2024 7:16:00 PM

No fear here Vie. Beautiful lines in your verse. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/8/2024 3:29:00 AM

Excellent advice. Such an eclipse could ruin your eyesight. Hugs, sweet Rose.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/8/2024 12:59:00 AM

best poetic advice ever! :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/7/2024 9:02:00 PM

This is an enjoyable poem. I'm glad eclipses don't occur too often.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/7/2024 4:12:00 AM

Quite inspiring lines with a message for those who fear. I am writing after a long time dear friend Rose and only few poems were placed on PS. Hope you are keeping well and fine. . With best wishes always... Ravindra

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/7/2024 3:43:00 AM

Good advise...and indeed, we do not have to look directly to know. Like those cities destroyed. Well said.

Silent One

Date: 4/6/2024 8:24:00 AM

Lovely and inspiring my friend..

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/6/2024 6:08:00 AM

perfect timing of your poem, dear Rose. I agree, 'let your circadian rhythm speak to your heart, and do not fear..' Delicate, wise words--your signature style--telling us that our internal sun will reappear. I appreciate the subtle depth of your words. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara