Eclipse
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My dear Selene
you continue
to amaze me...
tonight you took
my breath away
as I espied
the veiled beauty
of your flushed face
and like a fool
was lost for words!
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(My) Eclipse form: Consists of 10 lines,
each comprising 4 syllables (no rhyme).
© 27th July 2018
Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2018
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