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My dear Selene you continue to amaze me... tonight you took my breath away as I espied the veiled beauty of your flushed face and like a fool was lost for words! ------------------------------------------- (My) Eclipse form: Consists of 10 lines, each comprising 4 syllables (no rhyme). © 27th July 2018

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/2/2019 4:28:00 AM

This is crafted so beautifully and with such meaning ...

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2019 4:53:00 AM

Thank you, Kai. I'm pleased you found it worthy of praise. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/29/2018 11:16:00 AM

A very special poem Paul, full of admiration, ardour and love. Great write! warm regards, jennifer

Paul Callus
Date: 10/29/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer. Fortunately, though I was lost for words, I had my pen to help me out:) Warm regards // paul

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 8/20/2018 6:54:00 PM

Masterful write by the Master of Verse, Paul! Splendid verse. Many thx for your kind comments re The Haunted House poem and best to you - bob

Paul Callus
Date: 8/21/2018 4:38:00 PM

Thank you for the generous comments, Bob; they are truly appreciated. Best regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 8/14/2018 10:35:00 PM

Oh, Paul, this is very beautiful.. You left me with lost words.. The picture to go with it really made it standout.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/12/2018 1:26:00 PM

Hi Paiul, i love the content of this write. I love the intimacy, the rhythm and flow of your words as they paint such a wonderful living canvas in the mind. A wonderful form Paul. Your words grace it with beauty. This one has to sing its way into my faves. Have a wonderful end to your weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/13/2018 1:58:00 PM

Thank you, Mike; your complimentary feedback and the fave are immensely appreciated. May you have a nice and active week ahead of you, my friend. // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 8/10/2018 5:53:00 PM

Beautiful flowing words, loved the form, is it yours? Enjoyed immensely!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/11/2018 3:44:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, John! Yes, the form is mine...pleased you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/9/2018 8:44:00 PM

Hello Paul, I see you speaking to your special girl in this poem. Regards Darlene De Beaulieu

Paul Callus
Date: 8/10/2018 3:39:00 PM

Ah yes, Darlene...Selene could easily have been my girlfriend:) Have a nice weekend. // paul

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/8/2018 6:29:00 PM

I can see you standing and staring, mouth open, silently, awestruck. You captured that moment of wonder perfectly.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/9/2018 4:48:00 PM

You paint a striking picture, Sunlite:) Thank you for reading and liking. Best regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 8/4/2018 8:12:00 AM

Smooth and charming as if you were speaking to your lover. I like the form as well.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/6/2018 2:15:00 PM

Thank you, James. In one sentence you capture the gist of this poem. Glad you like the form, too. Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 8/3/2018 10:46:00 AM

Ohhhh...I must try this! It is beautiful!...and best of all it doesn't require antibiotic pentamenter Lol.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/3/2018 5:49:00 PM

Many thanks, my friend; glad you enjoyed it. No pentameter, this time, but it still requires a smooth flow that provides musicality. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/29/2018 9:23:00 PM

My good friend, you express so well your poetic thoughts and can do so in so few words. THE CREATIVITY AND DEPTH OF THIS ONE AWES ME!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/30/2018 2:17:00 AM

You are kind and generous, Robert! Your complimentary remarks have made my day...Thank you, my friend! Best regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/29/2018 3:33:00 PM

Your thoughts are beautiful, simply breathtaking. Nature and its moments, are truly inspiring. You have created a masterpiece. ~ Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thank you for your generous comments, Brandy. A pleasure to have you visiting, and to make your acquaintance. Regards ~ paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/29/2018 1:57:00 PM

i am smitten by the flow and eloquence of your lines, paul...this is moonlight magic!... huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 3:12:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Nette....truly cherished...hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/28/2018 9:49:00 PM

You know sometimes when I read a poem I like, I find it hard to say how so, however the greatest compliment I think is to say when I read poems such as this, it inspires me! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 1:13:00 PM

I can relate to your comments, Arthur...there are moments when I also get lost for words! Thank you for being inspired by my humble poem. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/28/2018 8:26:00 PM

Your poem's imagery soars on wings of exquisite form and beauty, dear Paul, but remains emotionally grounded in an intimate feeling we all can relate to. A breathtaking beauty and a fav! Warmest wishes and hugs always my dear and special friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 1:10:00 PM

Thank you dear Susan...your insightful comments cleverly touch on both main points of this poem. Your complimentary words and the fav are very much appreciated. Warm regards & Hugs, my friend...paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2018 4:44:00 PM

Love it Paul, four syllables per line not an easy task. The last line brings back memories of those awkward moments. Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 1:05:00 PM

I agree with you, Tom...4 syllables can be tricky, especially when keeping a steady flow of thought. Like your last comment, too:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2018 4:24:00 PM

A wonderful form Paul...to match your beautiful poem. I loved this, tho I missed seeing that moon last night. I observed it on T.V. from your part of the world. Gorgeous! : )

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 1:03:00 PM

The red moon was definitely gorgeous, Connie! Thank you for liking both poem & form. Warm regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/28/2018 4:17:00 PM

absolutely AWESOME Paul am adding this gem to my faves, hope the form is taken up and becomes an established poetry form:-) no blushing moon for us it was too cloudy to see the eclipse:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 1:01:00 PM

The 'awesome' comment and fav are much appreciated, dear Jan!! Pity you could not catch sight of the red moon; we are lucky here to enjoy clear summer nights. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2018 4:11:00 PM

Lovely and the form is awesome.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 12:59:00 PM

Thank you on both counts, Line:) Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/28/2018 4:00:00 PM

This is so beautiful Paul..exceptional!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2018 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for a lovely reaction, Vijay! Regards // paul