Echoes of Eternity

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Thank you to Brenda Chiri, and her poem, 'Words of the Writer,' for the idea...

A poem's sound More profound ~ The second time around

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/28/2019 4:49:00 AM

It is true I often have to have a second and sometimes third read.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/27/2019 3:23:00 PM

... Repeal the beating ground. Cute.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/2/2019 11:24:00 AM

Impossible, I followed you...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2019 5:34:00 PM

Wow! What a profound comment, Pashang. Much more profound than my simple monorhyme!! Thanks! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/27/2019 12:12:00 PM

Great one. So many poems are worth reading a 2nd time. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2019 1:06:00 PM

Hope this poem was worth a second look too! Happy Wednesday! ~ Gershon

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/27/2019 9:43:00 AM

Ah so sweet Gershon! Lol now I am really smiling! Wonderfully done my friend!;)