Echo Chills

it was good
as at the door,
a skull behind which
there was nothing more
than warm morning air, and
a rumbling sound of despair
hunger by the drive-way
for a soul, cold storage
awhile already spent
as rent, for now
nothing due
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Zahid Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 9:44 AM
A good one
Blown Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:57 AM
....thanks for the comment....the 'write' was about a bear at the front of the house in the spring....sorry the wording it finished with was a bit 'obscure?'........stan
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