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Ebony the Cat (Etheree)

EBONY THE CAT (Etheree) Ebony is pure black likes isolation Likes to curl up in some quiet place And dream wild dreams of stalk and chase Ebony likes her tuna fish Half a can on her dish Each morning at 6:00 Chomp chomp lick lick Then she’s off Sated Shhh!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 6:31:00 PM

Rereading your poems. I fear that is all I might be able to do becuase I swear I have seen them all, Daver! When I have less to do, I will try digging deep for ones I have not seen. have a great night. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2010 8:43:00 PM

OH, I love cat poems. HOw did I ever miss this? And an etheree to boot!! When you asked me "did you really visit" What were you referring to? the museums? I saw the Metropolitan. I don't know much about NYC, but the Modern ARt museum is something different from the Metropolitan, isnt' it? I saw the Metropolitan, not the other one. Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/7/2010 3:57:00 PM

I'm whispering now ;) really enjoyed this etheree of yours, Daver :) this is such a cute write about Ebony (love her name too)! --nikko :)

John Freeman

Date: 4/18/2010 9:32:00 AM

I've been reading all your comment below Daver. Purrrr your comments and buzzz the one you left on mine. Me thinks your writes draw bees to your bee's substance. In other words thanks for your sweet comment of Big love. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/14/2010 7:38:00 AM

very cute write!! thanks for the comments!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/10/2010 11:33:00 PM

Daver, this is so sweet and exactly how a cat behaves. It brought a smile to my face. My cat thinks he can talk and has morning conversations with me. I love etherees. This is a great one! Aloha, Connie I have been away for some time, ill with a cold but feeling better now. It is good to be back reading Soup poems again.

Sue Mason

Date: 4/10/2010 12:29:00 PM

Love the "dreams of stalk and chase" ... perfect cat description ... I miss my dog but maybe next year I'll get another one. Hope you're having a wonderful weekend and thanks for all your comments !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 4:15:00 PM

Great descriptive write...Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.. Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/8/2010 10:24:00 PM

A fine pen picture

Date: 4/8/2010 2:39:00 PM

The reverse etheree is an acceptable variation of the form--the fact that you did one is a compliment. Sorry you viewed it as a correction. I like people that can look beyond the standard. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Date: 4/8/2010 1:17:00 PM

Reverse etheree for us to enjoy! Got a chuckle out of it. Thanks for the day brightener and for your comments. Keep on writing my friend. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2010 12:52:00 PM

Love it, a cat poem!! soupmail!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/8/2010 11:32:00 AM

Fresh Tuna? Will you adopt me, Daver? Your cat has a wonderful home...or should I say catS? The "old codger" is an animal lover! But does he like Simon and Garfunkel? Can he write lyrics for the contest? Methinks he could, if he only would, he surely could. Hmmm, sounds a bit like El Condor Pasa. Okay, enough goading. Enjoyed your poem, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 4/8/2010 10:34:00 AM

BLESS YOU !MY CAT HAS A DAILY ROUTE EXCEPT HE IS A SHE. ENJOYED . ..THANK YOU 4 YOUR UPLIFTING COMMENT . you R right over with what you said .

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/8/2010 9:34:00 AM

A very luck black cat. To be cared about. .

Susan Palli

Date: 4/8/2010 9:15:00 AM

You've captured well, the life of a cat.