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Black velvet night with lacy fingers Parted the curtains from my eyes They sat huddled there in solitude Twirling lemon water in this sizzling heat Are they talking about me? Swinging under the leaves like grass I can see their lips move Screaming softly, a waltz thru sore throat Eyes glance my way As the world turns slowly watching me Strumming my hear strings Take me on the back of a bird I need you Cold building, cold shoulder Emotions ripple thru me Midnight has finally come Talk over, they depart Forehead ablaze, I chose to sleep For Debbie’s ‘ Stream of Consciousness’ contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/1/2011 10:48:00 PM
So unusual, and so cool to read this, Tahera. I love the imagery going on it. Congrats on the HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:12:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your HM in Debbie's contest with this phenom write luv.. another great honor to enjoy my friend...
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:23:00 AM
Many congrats Tahera for big win in Debbies contest with imagination at its best. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:43:00 AM
Dear Tahera, Congratulations on your success in the Stream of Consciousness contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 4/28/2011 1:56:00 AM
mahes me really haedy, tahera.. what a fine wirte.. big cheers for the fine win! :) hugggs!
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:38:00 PM
This is really wonderful. Nice emotions felt deep within while reading this poem
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:42:00 PM
I am in awe with this excellent write Tahera dear friend.. fantastic imagery with the black velvet curtain and lemon water eyes sizzling.. phenomenal piece.. good luck in the contest lluv..
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:05:00 AM
The introspective quality of this amazing work is quite provocative, Tahera. There is great sadness and longing. You did very well in capturing the "Stream of Consciousness." Best wishes in Deb's contest, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:34:00 AM
Beautiful and breathtaking! best of luck in the contest and thanks for your ever lovely comments on my poetry~~
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