Eavesdropping

Black velvet night with lacy fingers
Parted the curtains from my eyes
They sat huddled there in solitude
Twirling lemon water in this sizzling heat
Are they talking about me?
Swinging under the leaves like grass
I can see their lips move
Screaming softly, a waltz thru sore throat
Eyes glance my way
As the world turns slowly watching me
Strumming my hear strings
Take me on the back of a bird
I need you
Cold building, cold shoulder
Emotions ripple thru me
Midnight has finally come
Talk over, they depart
Forehead ablaze, I chose to sleep

For Debbie’s ‘ Stream of  Consciousness’ contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 10:48 PM
So unusual, and so cool to read this, Tahera. I love the imagery going on it. Congrats on the HM. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:12 PM
Congrats Tahera on your HM in Debbie's contest with this phenom write luv.. another great honor to enjoy my friend...
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Many congrats Tahera for big win in Debbies contest with imagination at its best. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 10:43 AM
Dear Tahera, Congratulations on your success in the Stream of Consciousness contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Tahera
Onclaud Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 1:56 AM
mahes me really haedy, tahera.. what a fine wirte.. big cheers for the fine win! :) hugggs!
M Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:38 PM
This is really wonderful. Nice emotions felt deep within while reading this poem
Sweetheart Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 7:42 PM
I am in awe with this excellent write Tahera dear friend.. fantastic imagery with the black velvet curtain and lemon water eyes sizzling.. phenomenal piece.. good luck in the contest lluv..
Devonshire Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:05 AM
The introspective quality of this amazing work is quite provocative, Tahera. There is great sadness and longing. You did very well in capturing the "Stream of Consciousness." Best wishes in Deb's contest, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Beautiful and breathtaking! best of luck in the contest and thanks for your ever lovely comments on my poetry~~
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