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Earthy Glow On a Farmland

Sometime, in July's budding charm when the harvest of earth's clay affirms that which exposes a content heart, I remember a glimpse of rare delight accepting the slow exposure of one morn when daylight warms Grandpa’s hands soaked in earthy glow on his farmland. A rumbling wind turns amiable, as bamboo drifts along lush curls glossing the husk of our fond whispers, oh, it is as simple as that: his gaiety becomes an answered prayer tasting the bliss of simple favors bestowed by a yield of cornfields reflecting the thrill of labor harnessed. In a flash, I watch Gramps' hat flying like a kite across a wispy sky, my innocence releases a laughter’s dance playful and blithe at age seven, while he, born from fruits of life ripens still, on his golden year with ease. Rob Carmack's Golden Days 4/3/2015
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April 18, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
Ebbs Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Nicely written Nette, congrats!
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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April 10, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Nette. I felt very near to you beautiful memory.
Guzzi Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Just wonderful nette, made me so want to know your Gramps! Congrad's Light & Love
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Such a lovely poem, Nette, that shares your fond memories of that golden time with your dear Grandpa. A heartfelt congratulations to your for your well-deserved top win! (And I feel honored to be on the stage with you!) Hugs, Sandra
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April 9, 2015 at 8:17 AM
It's an excellent piece of writing nette full of rich imagery.Binabati kita nette . salamat.
La France Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 6:27 AM
nette, congratulations on your first place win with this beautifully written poem full of wonderful lines, a perfect 7
Reams Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Congrats on your win. A beautiful poem.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 3:25 PM
wonderful vivid memories form your golden pen Nette - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your beautiful poem and win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations of your win! this is an excellent write that pulls your reader right back to that farm with you. ~jan
Nunez Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Wow, Nettie! This is such a treasure...I suddenly feel such nostalgia it's almost like some pain! I love your write! This is so your style! Such vivid images of the farm, your lolo, the hat blown in the wind...presumably with the sweet aroma of pinipig! Congratulations on your big win! Hugs! Kim :)
Richards Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 9:25 AM
With such contentment, one could melt away in this blissful poem. Simply beautiful !! Congrats on this well deserved win, Nette!
May Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Beautifully penned Nette...Congrats on your win
Carmack Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:29 AM
Reminded me of some of the farms I used to work on when younger. Congrats and thanks for participating.
Rv Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:17 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN, DEAR NETTE!! :D
Vaso Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 11:07 PM
Very heartwarming! Brings back some vivid memories for me!
Sirak Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:28 PM
I love this one! Grandfather and granddaughter enter the dance of life from different places yet they still wonderfully connect.
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Beautiful imagery, a 7 Blessings and a very Happy Easter
Datu Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 6:22 AM
Joyful moment! Your closing verse sparkles with one special memory. Eloquent poem!
Relish Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 2:05 AM
How very nostalgic Nette... reminded me of my grandpa... loved it... best wishes n hugs.. nad! #7
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 10:07 PM
wow, nette, I just love the nostalgia you inserted into this one, along with your imagery . sure to be a winner.
Peranteau Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Blissful write Nette ! A collage of beautiful moments amidst farm life dear poet, nicely writen ! Have a wonderful night.....much love, james
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