Earth's Neighbors

Through nature’s window Earth gazes at her neighbors On the star-jammed lane

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James Fraser

Date: 6/16/2010 3:12:00 PM

Terrific Haiku Audrey, one day it's going to be pretty crammed out there >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/16/2010 5:59:00 PM

Way cool, Audrey...life in the "star-jammed lane." Awesome haiku! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2010 10:34:00 AM

Nice one!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/13/2010 4:12:00 PM

My favorite of the ones I have seen!! Different thoughts on this picture.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/13/2010 3:09:00 PM

VERY NICE WRITE and thank you for your comment on my statue of liberty you are so right I was born and raised in NY moved to a small town in IN miss NY so much will go back for the summer faleshia

Daver Austin

Date: 4/13/2010 2:33:00 PM

Super! A clear vision. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2010 12:58:00 PM

what an original line, on the star jammed lane.Way to go with the contest entry! LUv ya, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/12/2010 9:11:00 PM

What a fine imges. Wonderful haiku with explicit meanings. Good luck

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/12/2010 7:32:00 PM

Star jammed lane indeed. I've never seen so many stars. good haiku Audrey. School holidays are always busy for me....take care. Maggie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 7:07:00 PM

WOW Audrey a sweet spin on the photo and good luck in Gareth's contest.. a really different view and a good one too..luv.. BBF Linda-Marie.. any updates on JAM?