Susan Lawrence Poet Free verse

Earth Whispers

Earth whispers
I hear her
I am here to receive 
Nuances of flight and discovery
My senses warm with anticipation

Fragments of hope and desire
Pain and loss
Arrive on moonbeams of broken glass
Shattered dreams sing
Delivering silky threads 
Glistening with seedlings of rebirth

Opening my heart, I close my eyes
Leaning forward into the warmth of the sun
Wearing my vulnerability on my sleeve
I dive headfirst off the cliff
Opening my arms to capture
The energy of the moment

Fingertips outstretched, reaching out 
Beckoning encounters with the here and now
How wonderous to receive you
Dear light and love
I journey into what was – what is - and what will be

Messages arrive from you
Feathered musical notes
Cries from the lonely ones
Howls from the night animals
Thunderheads boom in the distance
Piercing the velvet blackness

A warm wave caresses me as you glide by
Tickling me with your tailfeathers
Magic in motion as time stands still
Inside the teardrop I gaze outward
Immersed in the beauty of
What it means to be alive

Persimmon heartbeats envelope me
A gentle rhythm as we rise
To the downy envelope between 
Earth and sky
Gliding in peace and unity
Through star crusted waves of 
Lavender light 
Exhaling gratitude

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Mystic Rose Rose June 27, 2024 at 9:06 AM you are awesome Susan, thank you for this gift of word today, I am glad I dropped by, your poems, they are very inspiring to say the least.

Jennifer Proxenos April 15, 2024 at 12:37 AM Inside the teardrop I gaze e outward immersed in the beauty of what it means to be alive". How I love this soul driven poem of warmth wnd love both your humanity and celestial understanding interwoven in your talented write. A definite fav for me . Big congrats on the truly deserved honour bestowed on you of POTD - A little belated but heartfelt. Dear Susan Hugs and blessings Jennifer Susan Lawrence April 25, 2024 at 1:56 PM Hi dear Jennifer, Such a pleasure to have you visit my poem. I’ve so missed being on Poetry Soup. Life has been beyond busy and has taken me away from this beautiful spiritual realm of wonderfully humans like you. Thank you for your kind remarks and depth of compassion. Sending love to you and big hugs looking forward to returning and doing some more reading and writing very soon. XX all my best, Susan :)

Silpika Kalita March 17, 2024 at 4:10 PM What a beautiful amalgamation of flow and rhetoric, each and every sentence in communion with all the visuals, mood with tender magical touch. Susan Lawrence March 23, 2024 at 8:50 PM Dearest Silpika, A belated thank you for the gift of your presence. Your in depth and passionate comments leave me in gratitude. I look forward to reading more of your beautiful poems soon . Blessings, Susan :)

Sam Kauffman February 9, 2024 at 11:19 AM So beautiful, Susan! Every line transmits "lavender light," "gratitude," "magic in motion," as you "dive headfirst" into this song of romance and unison of spirits. What a pleasure to read. So sorry I missed your POTD honor. Congratulations! This is so deserving! Happy Valentine's Day to you. May your days be filled to the brim with blessings, my friend! Susan Lawrence February 13, 2024 at 7:07 PM Happy Valentine’s Day lovely Sam ! What a gift to have your beautiful comments and visit ! It been way too long since I have had a moment to dive into your poems and be present here . Thank you for you ! Big hugs and many blessings. Love, Susan :)

Beryl Edmonds January 29, 2024 at 2:35 AM Beautiful poetry Susan, there’s nothing like the sounds of earth, natures symphony brings harmony. Beryl Susan Lawrence February 3, 2024 at 11:09 AM A belated thank you for your visit and lovely comments dear Beryl. Big hugs, Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid January 15, 2024 at 9:51 AM What a beautiful poem Susan. Loved it. Cheers Susan Lawrence February 3, 2024 at 11:04 AM Dear Paghunda, A belated thank you for your lovely visit and comments. Hugs, Susan :)

Mystic Rose Rose January 4, 2024 at 3:42 AM wow you sure know how to write poetry, to the excellence of beauty and charm. Thanks for sharing your delightful verse today, have a blessed day Susan. stay well Susan Lawrence February 3, 2024 at 11:01 AM Thank you dear Rose ! A belated response to your visit . Sending all good thoughts your way. Blessings and hugs, Susan :)

Victor Buhagiar January 3, 2024 at 10:55 PM My apologies as I was lethargic in wishing you a Happy New Year. Susan Lawrence January 6, 2024 at 1:36 PM Hi Victor . I hope you are feeling strong and robust and energetic ! Wishing you a wonderful year ahead . Big hugs, Susan :)

Kelly Deschler December 30, 2023 at 4:42 PM Nature has a way of bringing us peace with her many beauties ... I felt as if I were right there, sharing such a wonderful moment with you ... Excellent writing, Susan! Susan Lawrence January 6, 2024 at 1:36 PM Thank you dear Kelly ! I appreciate your presence . It is wonderful to hear from you . Big hugs and very happy new year to you . Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2023 at 10:23 AM Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A beautiful write with a great ending. I wish you would write more... Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away................. Susan Lawrence January 2, 2024 at 6:35 PM Thank you dear Paula ! I appreciate your visit and kind words . Big hugs and a very happy new year to you . Susan :)

Paul Callus December 16, 2023 at 7:56 AM Even though Mother Earth is used and abused, she still labours on, patiently waiting for fresh strength to fill her weary jaded limbs. She shows that life is to be lived and not squandered away. Your words, Susan, are a celebration of life, full of hope, desire and gratitude. ~ Congratulations on p/o/t/d/ award, my friend. ~ Warm regards, hugs and blessings // paul Susan Lawrence December 19, 2023 at 7:26 PM Dearest Paul , Such a treat to have you visit and pour your beautiful comments and insightfulness into my life . I cherish you and your poems and life force . Thank you for your congratulations and presence. Hugs and all good wishes for a happy holiday . Love, Susan :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers December 14, 2023 at 7:45 AM Susan, your poem is a breathtaking journey through the human experience, beautifully capturing the essence of life’s ebbs and flows. The depth of emotion and vivid imagery you’ve woven into each line is truly captivating, making the poem a testament to your remarkable poetic talent. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel Susan Lawrence December 19, 2023 at 7:23 PM Dear Daniel . Apologies for my tardy reply to your wonderful visit and comments. In gratitude for your passionate response to my poem . I am so grateful we could take this journey together . Blessings to you , Susan :)

Susan Ashley December 1, 2023 at 6:56 AM Dearest Susan, my esteemed poetry sister and time-travel companion, your supple, softened soul shines with humanity and spirituality. An acceptance without reservation of both duality and oneness. I hear the whispers of your soul, of Earth, of the Universe, of past and present lives in the rich loving beauty of your poetic pen. Lush imagery brings me to stand side by side with you, and to fly with you, in the wonder of the scene, the exhilaration of being alive, the magic of the present moment, and with gratitude for your exquisite poetic gift. A breathtaking piece, but this verse especially caught my breath "Inside the teardrop I gaze outward" Wow! The enchanting power of your extraordinary words allows us to transform and soar the thermals of, "what was – what is - and what will be" on gliding white wings. Your poetic gift outshines in the embrace of your expressive spirit. Warmest wishes, love and hugs, I hope all is well with you and yours, my sweet sis.. ~Susan Susan Lawrence December 5, 2023 at 9:18 AM Hi dearest Susan , your words are a welcome gift in my heart and soul. Your presence is always cherished, and always received with immense gratitude. Your ability to transcend this life, and fly and soar into realms of past present and future always inspire me. I am grateful for the gift of you, your spirit and soul and heart and amazing intelligence. Thank you thank you my friend for all that you are. I send love and hugs and all good wishes to you now and always, love, Susan :)

Valsa George November 30, 2023 at 9:43 PM I got levitated into ether and have joined you in this ethereal journey. This is a celestial glide in peace and unity. Your images and word choices are striking. Despite pain and loss, there are fragments of hope and desire. "Magic in motion as time stands still Inside the teardrop I gaze outward Immersed in the beauty of What it means to be alive"... ! Indeed we are blessed to be alive. As ever, your skillful hands have carefully crafted every line. Congrats Susan on your well deserved POTD. Susan Lawrence December 3, 2023 at 7:52 AM Dearest Valsa, Your presence, insight and deep comments are always a gift to me . Received with gratitude, I cherish your heart and companionship on my poetry journeys. I send you big hugs and all good wishes for a happy and memorable holiday season with your family and loved ones . Love and blessings, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2023 at 3:51 PM I see this was a POTD. So beautiful. Love the idea of lavender light exhaling gratitude Susan Lawrence November 28, 2023 at 6:58 PM Thank you dear Andrea . Sending big hugs :)

Lisa Ricci November 21, 2023 at 7:37 AM Hello Susan. Good Morning. Yes, earth does whisper and never did you stray from your title. Your entry is lovely with all poetic elements attached including imagery and emotion too. Free verse was an excellent choice and it flowed beautifully with clarity. Your ending line is priceless because may we all have gratitude. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. May this day find you well. Peace and Blessings (smile) PS - Congratulations on a deserved POTD Susan Lawrence November 26, 2023 at 8:41 AM Big hugs Lisa. In gratitude for you and your visit . I appreciate your presence and words of support and engagement. All the best . Happy we could take this journey together. Susan :)

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2023 at 12:05 PM Congratulations on your POTD with this wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for stopping by my page. Sara K Susan Lawrence November 26, 2023 at 8:26 AM Hi Sara ! I hope you had a great thanksgiving! Big hugs and a belated thank you for your visit . Susan :)

Deb M November 17, 2023 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on POTD Susan….a beautiful Title , a truly beautiful poem from a beautiful poet! Debx Susan Lawrence November 26, 2023 at 8:25 AM Hi dear Deb . A belated thank you for your visit and congratulations. Big hugs to you dear one ! Susan :)

I Am Anaya November 15, 2023 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on your POTD! There is always something new to discover on our beautiful gem. Wishing you a journey filled with light, Susan. xAnayaxo Susan Lawrence November 24, 2023 at 4:00 PM Hi dear Anaya, A belated thank you for your visit and message of light! In gratitude for you . Xx Susan :)

Victor Buhagiar November 13, 2023 at 12:01 AM Fantastic exposition of romantic yearnings A worthy POTD despite loss of love, phantasmagorical imagery that touches the heart. CONGRATULATIONS on your POTD. Blessings. Susan Lawrence November 22, 2023 at 8:27 PM Thank you dear Victor . I appreciate your presence so much . In gratitude. Happy Thanksgiving . Big hugs, Susan :)

Brandy Nicole November 12, 2023 at 5:54 PM Dearest Susan, your thoughts whisper in the wind. Even though there is pain, loss and shattered dreams; unconditional love is felt. My heart rejoices in this truth. So beautiful, uplifting and spiritual are your words, my dear friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy Susan Lawrence November 22, 2023 at 8:25 PM Brandy , A belated thank you for the gift of your words and heart . I am always in gratitude receiving you. Such a special soul you are . Thank you for the gift of you. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours . Hugs, Susan :) Susan Lawrence November 22, 2023 at 8:23 PM Brandy , A belated thank you for the gift of your words and heart . I am always in gratitude receiving you. Such a special soul you are . Thank you for the gift of you. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours . Hugs, Susan :)

Panagiota Romios November 12, 2023 at 3:54 PM A most artistic write, Susan, congratulations on PTRD, phenomenal imagery, goes without saying…. Celebrate….priceless poetess! Pangie xxxx Susan Lawrence November 22, 2023 at 8:21 AM Hi dear Pangie . A belated thank you for your visit and greetings. You are a gift dear poetess ! I love your self expression and your unique vision and spirit . Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs, Susan :)

Sam Kauffman November 12, 2023 at 10:17 AM Susan, congratulations on your POTD with this magnificent poem of "lavender light exhaling gratitude." It is truly "magic in motion," poetic joy on springs. I am awestruck by your amazing word use and imagery that leaves a sensual fingerprint through each carefully crafted line. You have such a wonderful ability to take me on a poetic journey line by line. I am thrilled, dear friend, for your honor. Every time I read one of your poems I know my heart is in for a joy ride! Blessings! Susan Lawrence November 19, 2023 at 8:12 AM Oh dear Sam . You really have made my heart smile with your passionate words . It is such a gift to be able to take this poetic journey with you . I feel companionship and gratitude. Thank you thank you for the gift of you! Big hugs , Susan ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2023 at 10:00 AM - A wonderful poem, Susan - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs ? Susan Lawrence November 18, 2023 at 8:00 AM Thank you dear Anne-Lise ! Big hugs, Susan :)

Ink Empress November 12, 2023 at 9:41 AM This is absolutely stunning and soul warming dear Susan, its been a while since iv last read something from you, and when i do, i am always in awe of how creative your diction is, the way you paint such detailed imagery with descriptive lines that flow in such a mellifluous cadence is beyond captivating and impeccable. I especially love the ending, .. soulfully divine, congratulations on POTD, well deserved really Susan Lawrence November 18, 2023 at 7:59 AM Dear Ink, Your visits and articulate deep comments are always a gift . I love the way you write and express your innermost heart and feelings in such a unique way . Your words flow like a magic waterfalls . Hugs to you , Susan :)

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