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EARLY MORNING RAIN
It was still early when the clouds gave way to rain, soaking the grass and trees and filling the road with splashes. The sound was soothing, much like Mother’s hum. The street was quickly transformed from a dull photograph to a glossy magazine page. I ran towards my car, each splash touching my skin and darkening my cardigan.
it smells beautiful healing scent of falling rain falling and falling forming tiny droplets on leaves, flowers, and windowpanes

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Date: 6/25/2025 9:17:00 AM
- A lovely morning shower, Yellow Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 6/24/2025 6:59:00 PM
Lovely!!
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Date: 6/24/2025 6:50:00 PM
Oh wow, this made me so happy...I love rain! I'm so glad I read this beautiful piece of writing! Thank you for sharing this <3
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Date: 6/22/2025 8:00:00 PM
Intimate, cozy... rain... falling, falling. Tender, poignant imagery, Yellow Rose. Thanks, gw
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Date: 6/22/2025 11:08:00 AM
The street was quickly transformed from a dull photograph to a glossy magazine page...very nice, YR!
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Date: 6/22/2025 11:05:00 AM
Hello Yellow Rose, Yes it smells wonderful during a rainfall and after the rain fall. i do not run when it rains. Instead I walk. Yet if it is thundering i will not go out. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 6/22/2025 8:00:00 AM
Dear Rose, your flawless words create a captivating aura—a lovely description of how rain lights dusty scenery and restores life.
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Date: 6/22/2025 5:08:00 AM
Nice title, photo, and poem! Morning summer rain smells beautiful! Very enjoyed read! Have a nice day with best wishes!
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