Early Morning In the Country

EARLY MORNING IN THE COUNTRY

			The smell of fresh brewed coffee
			The sound of bacon slowly sizzling in the pan
			And the heady aroma it creates
			Homemade biscuits in the oven
			Sending the scent of their baking
			Into the far corners of every room in the house
			A bottle of cane syrup 
			Made the old fashioned way on Thanksgiving Day
			Freshly churned butter for the biscuits once they're done
			Mourning doves cooing to each other
			Twelve sparrows jockeying for positions
			On the nine available perches on the feeder
			The sun slowly beginning to peep over the horizon
			As if testing the day to see if it's time to rise and shine
			Its rays scattering sunbeams through the winter foliage
			The frost slowly, almost reluctantly, beginning to melt
			Young squirrels scurrying around 
			Under the centuries old oak tree, searching for acorns
			No concrete and steel buildings
			No jostling crowds
			No cabs, buses, or honking horns
			No exhaust fumes
			Ah! The beauty, joy, peace, and tranquility
			Of early morning in the country


	1 February 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 11:41 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Curtis.
Moorman Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Thank you, Line! Your responses are such a welcome sight to me. You always come through with such encouragement and it pleases me no end.
Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:47 PM
A wonderful write with beautiful imagery Curtis. Congratulations on your lovely win.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Moorman Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Susan, for such kind remarks. Just as I told Richard, these are real memories from my childhood. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 6:14 PM
An enjoyable mood created by this winning piece. Congrats.
Moorman Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Thanks, Richard. True memories of my childhood. If you have never tasted Georgia Cane Syrup, you are in for a delectable treat as far as I'm concerned but neither of my two children will eat it. I am humbled by your support.
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 5:40 PM
'this is just wonderful , Curtis. Glad to see it got a win with Skat too. I want to soupmail you something. So I'll see you in soupmail.
Moorman Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Glad you liked it. I was glad to get a win with SKAT also.
A  Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Hello Curtis, I sure enjoyed the imagery, :) Congrats on your win, thank you for entering my contest. HUGS **SKAT**
Moorman Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT! Your contests always offer a challenge to the poet. I am overjoyed, and overwhelmed to see my name in the winner's circle. Thanks for selecting my work as a winning entry.
Ramsdale Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Filled to full with imagery Curtis! Just wonderful. CR
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading your poem
Freeman Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Curtus, Loved it , great job, congratulations on your witty poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Curtis. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 7:37 PM
Congrats Curtis on your HM in the Pure Thoughts contest with this exciting entry luv..enjoy special honor...
Palli Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:16 AM
very picturesque and I can smell the aromas
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