Early Morn
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Stars still twinkle
With moon mingle
Suddenly dawn breaks red
The chilled air wraps
And penetrates core
But relaxes at same time
It surrounds all of life
Good emotions restored
Poetry form: xiaoshi-xiao means poetry, shi means little
There are several ways to do this form, but I used this one:
8 lines, 3 characters per line(that is Chinese characters so I used more but it must be short)
First two lines rhyme and the other six lines don't rhyme
Should express emotions or feelings
It can be written very similar to a Haiku but at least 6 lines long
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023
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