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Early April

Afternoon sun toasty warm basking in beams of light a newborn wrapped in a quilt clearest of clear blue skies flawless brush strokes not even a slip of a cloud... as the sun dips toward the horizon a cry escapes baby's lips I can see her breath

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Date: 4/2/2020 3:48:00 PM
How peacefully domestic, with the quilt and clear sky - then the turn on the baby's breath - very layered write, gw!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2020 10:21:00 PM
Thanks for the love on this imagism piece. I did try to spread it pretty thick. Best always, Gershon
Date: 4/2/2020 1:21:00 AM
A beautiful slice of life; I feel the sun and see the baby.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2020 10:21:00 PM
But did you hear the baby cry?! LOL. Thanks, Caren

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