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Eap-Gleam

The midnight stars still gleam: and the dark sky just beams with the light bouncing off the stream by the end of the night it always seems as the day goes by the light controls my dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2010 7:07:00 AM
this flowed really well and somehow I can also relate to this :) I could just picture this so well in my head :) Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:41:00 AM
Very nice eap poem, Brandee. Good luck in Brian's contest. (And thank you for commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/14/2010 6:15:00 PM
A nice steady rise in rhythm to this piece. good luck in the contest. Many thanks for reading my efforts. ---Margaret
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:04:00 PM
Beautiful, dear Brandee. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:01:00 PM
Nice work. good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/13/2010 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest,Brandee Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:32:00 PM
Very nicely done! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:06:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..this is very nice.BG
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Date: 1/13/2010 3:13:00 PM
Lovely image of the stars on the stream. Like the thought that the light they emit might actually follow you into dreamland. Nice entry for Brian's contest, Brandee. Good luck! Love, Carolyn
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