Eagle Dives

eagle dives unseen wire hazard mouse saved For Charles Henderson haiku contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2011 1:07:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this cute one..Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/25/2011 5:54:00 AM

too bad some one couldn't throw something up on the wire like you see kids do , sneakers etc. so the bird would notice the wire better?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2011 7:47:00 PM

ouch lol, the mouse was saved indeed outta sheer luck, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2011 3:44:00 PM

Very keen and nice observation of a miraculous event of the mouse saved, Joyce. A great haiku

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2011 1:44:00 PM

eagle hungry now :) Ohhh did the eagle die? I do hope not..so much to think about in so few words! Thanks for reading my verses and commenting. Light 7 Love

Steven Henderson

Date: 1/24/2011 10:34:00 AM

You made me chuckle Charles. Nice write! Steve

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:57:00 AM

What a clever haiku, Joyce. I can see this happening. Did you submit too late to be included in the contest? I surely see this one as a winner. Thanks for your kind words on my blog. It means so much to know I have the support of good friends like you and Dane Ann. Love, Carolyn