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I know all about disapproval and condemnation, apathy and consternation are the bricks in my wall; each brick takes me further into isolation, there are vines that my tears grew and under them for shelter I crawl. And in safety my predilection and reverence I explore, encompassed and bound with my words that pour; into surreal unearthliness- I drift, soar and f a l l . . . fall. __________________________________ October 31, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Each Brick Is My Forevermore Copyright Protected, ID 10-1081-690-31 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, 7 Lines, 7 Words, Rhyme sponsor Lu Loo, Judged 11/2018 Second Place

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Date: 12/3/2018 8:37:00 AM
Michael, thank you for visiting my poem with that great comment, I would love to sour with you~
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Greg, Joseph and Pixie for those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:08:00 AM
Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, Constance - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-) <3
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2018 8:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 1:22:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Dear Heart.. Beautiful :)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2018 8:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 1:07:00 PM
Very nicely penned DH..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 12:25:00 PM
You perfectly rhymed it with beauty congrats on your 2nd place win, Dear Heart.
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:41:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 11:16:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for visiting my poem with comment and congratulations, so appreciated ~
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:03:00 AM
So well done, Dear Heart! Beautifully written and composed. Sad in a way, I do hope you will or have crawled out from the vines and you're eyes have dried. Congratulations on your win in the contest...:) Charlie
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Date: 11/27/2018 11:16:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2018 7:29:00 AM
LOVED the title firstly...amazing poem, great rhyming and rhythm and metaphors. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2018 11:15:00 AM
:-) Thank you so much for the contest and my awesome placement, appreciate ~

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