Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Each Brick

I know all about disapproval and condemnation,
apathy and consternation are the bricks in my wall;
each brick takes me further into isolation,
there are vines that my tears grew and under them for shelter I crawl.
And in safety my predilection and reverence I explore,
encompassed and bound with my words that pour;
into surreal unearthliness-   I drift, soar and  f a l l . . . fall.


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October 31, 2018

Poetry/Rhyme/Each Brick Is My Forevermore
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1081-690-31
All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, 7 Lines, 7 Words, Rhyme
sponsor Lu Loo, Judged 11/2018

Second Place

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Constance La France December 3, 2018 at 8:37 AM Michael, thank you for visiting my poem with that great comment, I would love to sour with you~

Constance La France November 28, 2018 at 9:19 AM Thank you Greg, Joseph and Pixie for those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~

Gregory Richard Barden November 28, 2018 at 1:08 AM Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, Constance - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-) <3 Constance La France November 28, 2018 at 8:40 AM :-)

Eve Roper November 27, 2018 at 1:22 PM Congratulation on your win, Dear Heart.. Beautiful :) Constance La France November 28, 2018 at 8:40 AM :-)

Joseph May November 27, 2018 at 1:07 PM Very nicely penned DH..Congrats on your win.. Constance La France November 28, 2018 at 8:40 AM :-)

Mystic Rose Rose November 27, 2018 at 12:25 PM You perfectly rhymed it with beauty congrats on your 2nd place win, Dear Heart. Constance La France November 28, 2018 at 8:41 AM :-)

Constance La France November 27, 2018 at 11:16 AM Charlie, thanks for visiting my poem with comment and congratulations, so appreciated ~

Charles Messina November 27, 2018 at 9:03 AM So well done, Dear Heart! Beautifully written and composed. Sad in a way, I do hope you will or have crawled out from the vines and you're eyes have dried. Congratulations on your win in the contest...:) Charlie Constance La France November 27, 2018 at 11:16 AM :-)

Beautiful Scars November 27, 2018 at 7:29 AM LOVED the title firstly...amazing poem, great rhyming and rhythm and metaphors. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo Constance La France November 27, 2018 at 11:15 AM :-) Thank you so much for the contest and my awesome placement, appreciate ~