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e z now parallel lines only meet ~ when lions and zebras catch up to eat

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I Am Anaya

Date: 5/29/2023 1:43:00 PM

The price of freedom is eternal vigilance. I can't watch Animal Kingdom!

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/31/2023 12:42:00 AM

I believe in luck, but I’m not sure if it’s only measured through human eyes, on the large universal scale it’s probably just random chaos,

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/30/2023 10:05:00 AM

The 4 levels of the food chain, I had Memorial Day on my mind, here it was Memorial Day. Crazy alright, we are lucky, unless you don't believe in luck, lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/30/2023 12:59:00 AM

Heya Anaya, yes to a certain degree we should always stay vigilant, but I think with animals it’s different, hunger and thirst drives them to take risks, even the lions sometimes bite off more than they can chew, it’s a crazy life but somehow it works, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/26/2023 1:58:00 AM

Great monoku. Renders this very picturesque.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/26/2023 4:57:00 AM

Hopefully it makes sense in a grotesque manner of speaking too, cheers David

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 5/25/2023 8:27:00 PM

Enjoyed your monoku and the discussion that followed in comments.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/26/2023 4:56:00 AM

Thanks Vickey, always great to have a little banter about my posts, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 5/25/2023 8:47:00 AM

One of those unparalleled moments when I want to damn "survival of the fittest." You've such a creative mind, David...;-)

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/25/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thanks Lin, Perhaps in a parallel universe, herbivore lions are prey to carnivorous zebras, but at a base level nature tries keep itself in balance, cheers David