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Fibonacci Poetry Contest  ~ Sponsored by Ink Empress [January 2024] Placed 2nd

 

Dyslexia

Why would people criticise a child’s best efforts because he does not measure up to their own abilities and twisted reasoning? Learning disorders are not to be looked down on; instead, motivation is the key. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
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George Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 6:05 AM
So very true. Those children suffering from learning disabilities shouldn't be looked down , but should be motivated with encouragement. A great message.
Callus Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 1:57 AM
Glad most of us agree on this, Valsa. Thank you for visiting...happy weekend. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Nicely done. A great message for all. And congrats on the win
Callus Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 1:05 PM
Thank you on all counts, Andrea :) Have an enjoyable weekend, my friend. // paul
Y. Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 8:38 PM
Hi Paul, I can relate to this poem, I have a form of dyslexia. Not in the way that I see words backwards, it's a learning disability. I have often felt like I was dumb because my brain didn't work like the other students. One should not be be ridiculed because they have a learning disability. Bravo to you for penning such a write. Congratulations on your win-Alexis
Callus Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Dear Alexis, none of us are perfect, and there is no shame in having a learning disability. I've had many such students, and I am proud of those who do well in life despite certain limitations. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your personal life experience. Best regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Bravo! Such truth! Learning disabilities are not something to ridicule. Often the frustration comes from ignorance. We should all do better
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Thank you, Eileen. As teachers, we both have had the opportunity to come in close contact with such students, and for a start it is wise to focus on their strengths rather than their weaknesses. Hugs and goodnight // paul
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March 30, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Very sad if people do criticise a childs best efforts, no empathy or understanding and lack of knowledge themselves. If a child has disabilities or learning disorders, he or she must be encouraged, , loved and motivated, not looked down upon, do they not see their own inabilty to smoke too much to drink too much or to commit adultrey all the time, what a shame there are people like this in this world of ours, shame, a crying shame. Hugs blessings Paul, Happy Easter PAUL, ours is in May Congratulations on your win. Hugs Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 11:47 AM
As always, I'm enjoying reading your feedback dear Jenny! You certainly know what life is all about! Our job is to support and not criticize others. ~ May you and your loved ones have a Happy & Blessed Easter, my friend. Warm regards & hugs // paul
Ashley Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 6:08 PM
Dear Paul, your golden poetry reveals the beauty of empathy that resides within you and inspires your creative spirit. Your students were very fortunate to have you as a teacher, a role model and a mentor- I should know, you've been all of that for me, plus a wonderful poetry friend too, since I joined PS back in 2017! :) I read below that you've had 2 surgeries.. I hope your lab results yield nothing but good news for you and that your recouperation is going well. We all miss your insightful poetic presence. Warmest wishes and hugs, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Thank you dear Susan. I hadn't been on Soup for a while; lots of catching up to do! The first 2 lab results were not good, but now all malignant cells have been removed, and that sure is a relief! Now it's time to get back into the groove. (still finding it hard to wear reading glasses, so I limit myself to brief periods online) ~ I wish you a happy Easter while sending you warm regards and hugs, my friend // paul
Dome Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 7:21 PM
So true Paul and well written. Pete.
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, Peter. Pls excuse the late reply; had some health issues to deal with. Regards // paul
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 2:35 PM
well said, Paul. I hope all is well with you
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 4:57 PM
So sorry to read of this Paul, stay positive and look after yourself and Sheila and family. hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Hi my friend Thank you for visiting. I'm recuperating after 2 consecutive surgeries to remove a rare melanoma on side of nose. Hoping that lab results will be ok. Best regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Motivation and seeing what gifts the child does bring. I have a grandchild with a learning disability, but oh so artistic. Blessings, Paul!
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Thank you for adding flavor to my poem with words drawn from personal experience, Kim. ~ Regards & blessings // paul
Radice Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 1:04 AM
Those that are ignorant of such issues and prone to criticise are, in my opinion, the less well educated. Great poem Paul. Cheers - Gary
Callus Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Thank you for addition to my thoughts, Gary. Enjoy the week ahead! Regards // paul
Bell Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 2:20 AM
Some of our greatest brains are dyslexic. Always think you're as good as your school. Teachers will probably say they haven't the time, which is a cop out.
Callus Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 6:14 AM
True, Paul. Fortunately nowadays there is more awareness, and good conscientious teachers do their best to meet the needs of such students. Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
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February 5, 2024 at 12:04 PM
I think what worsens the situation for children who have learning difficulties is the absence of specialised institutions along with highly qualified educators or teachers of a deep well of tolerance, patience and empathy, mainly in developing countries.. hence with such inabilities, children become an easy prey to narrow minded people and bullies.. This is a life concern that touches humanity and determines their identity and future.. To raise awareness and enlighten the dark hearts and minds in a didactic wonderful poetry is so like you, Paul.. A highly qualified teacher of great experience and worth and a poet of grandeur ! I so much missed reading you.. and it is my immense delight and honour to read your thoughts and visions. I would also like to congratulate you on the honour of your win and placement. My deepest regards and blessings.
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Thank you for your insightful feedback and generous complimentary remarks, dear Besma. As a teacher, you too understand the need to raise awareness concerning topics such as this one. ~ I hope to be able to make time and visit your posts more often, Warm regards and blessings, my friend // paul
Buhagiar Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 2:28 AM
You make a good teacher. A great lesson. I was not good at teaching, so I left.
Callus Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Thank you, Victor. Teaching is not an easy job, though parents tend to think otherwise :( I am glad that you went on to find success in the Government Civil Service. ~ Regards // paul
Nicole Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Dear Paul, your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. I think this quote fits perfectly here. ' A child is like a butterfly in the wind. Some can fly higher than others, but each one flies the best it can. Each one is different, each one is special and each one is beautiful. ' Your ending thought curls gently around me. ' motivation is the key. ' You're so right, my sweet friend. Your words are beautiful, tender and so uplifting. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 9:15 AM
Thank you for liking my poem, Brandy, but even more for the insightful comments you delivered. ~ Regards & Hugs, my friend.
Severo Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 12:18 AM
Nice poem, in fact is not a dis order at all, simply a different way of seeing things, the dis order may be in not being dyslexic. :) xoxo
Callus Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 6:44 AM
Thank you for stopping by and airing your view, Aurore:) Personally I prefer calling dyslexia "a learning difficulty". I am happy to say that some students of mine who had dyslexia went on to have successful careers. ~ Warm regards my friend // paul
Empress Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 5:45 AM
Dear Paul, good to see you write for the contest too, and i loved this, what you’ve conveyed here, hope it would raise awareness and let those with dyslexia know that they are not alone. And your message in this is truly powerful and much needed. A world that criticize everything, we can only hope people would accept and be more kind. Always love a poem that raises awareness on important subjects: congratulations on your win: thank you for sharing
Callus Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Empress, for, not only including my poem in the winners' list, but also for your insightful feedback. Poetry is an excellent tool by which we can raise awareness regarding various issues, especially social ones. ~ Best regards // paul
Ricci Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 3:34 AM
Hello Paul. Good Morning. Excellent execution on the fibonacci format and wonderful message of worth of dyslexia. Although this appears to be an entry for a contest it stands on its own. Truly. People can be so mean and clueless and insensitive. Have a wonderful morning and day and may people open their eyes and ears. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:41 PM
- My father had dyslexia ... he was simply kicked out of school because they thought he was stupid (but, that was many years ago) ... fortunately, people understand better today - An important topic to write about, Paul - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Callus Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Thank you for reading and sharing a most personal unsavoury experience, dear Anne-Lise. Warm regards and hugs // paul
Bauer Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:41 PM
beautifully expressed, paul!
Callus Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Glad you liked it Ilene...thank you and regards // paul
One Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 11:02 AM
An excellent idea for this contest and you wrote the form so well..
Callus Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Thank you S1. Dyslexia has always been a topic close to my heart. ~ Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Wise words indeed Paul, i know this was written from your experience as a teacher and from my own perspective, having worked with student's with additional needs, I have nothing but admiration and praise for them as their achievements although they may be small to others are massive steps forward. :-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 2:18 AM
First of all please excuse my late reply, and secondly I send you belated wishes for your birthday. ~ I enjoyed your Fibonacci entry, and I can assure you that I like it better than mine (more poetic). Thank you for the insightful feedback to which I'm in full agreement. Hugs // paul
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