Dying of the Day

There is beauty in the dying of the day 
where shadows lengthen in the dusk
waters ripple with enchanted hush 
as twilight chases the sunlight away. 

The waning light casts flames beneath 
low, fading clouds, in searing reds
with hints of blue above their heads
as darkness calls the day to sleep. 

And as the grand metropolis grows dim 
across that widespread River
a flock of geese swim in a sliver
of moonlight, ‘neath branch and limb.

Another day passes quietly away 
like currents that move steadily along
replaced by night and crickets in song
until day returns in glorious array. 






Written on 10/17/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Edmonds  Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 5:05 PM
A beautiful poem Laura, there’s nothing quite as enchanting as the sky at sunset, nature at its best. Belle
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September 29, 2020 at 8:59 PM
Thank you, Belle. So glad you enjoyed this! :)
Watt Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 12:41 AM
Laura, your love of nature comes out so well in your poetry. Your descriptions just glisten: "low, fading clouds, in searing reds", "waters ripple with enchanted hush", "replaced by night and crickets in song"; all so luscious. Beautiful write, my friend. Hugs ~ John
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 4:59 PM
Hello Laura Leiser, I like the sound of the evening sounds.I find them to be relaxing. Have a nice evening my friend.
Leiser Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 12:11 AM
Thank you, Darlene. Evenings and mornings are my favorite times of the day. :)
La Rosa Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 2:13 AM
Beautifully written
Leiser Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 1:32 AM
Smoothly done, as smooth as one day folds into another.
Leiser Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Caren. So glad you liked this! :)
Aurora Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:16 PM
This so soft and soothing like a lullaby. A beautiful portrait of the winding down of day.
Leiser Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Thank you, Midnight! ;)
Ligon Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful perspective on the dying of the day. Well crafted poem.
Leiser Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:54 PM
Thank you, Juliet :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Beautiful writing. I love the way nature makes its way through our hearts. It's a wonderful thing. God bless you always, Gina
Leiser Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:54 PM
Thank you, Regina! :)
Mcconnell Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Such a lovely piece Laura, so well written with good imagery throughout. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 5:46 AM
Thanks so much for commenting, Gordon. I’m so glad you enjoyed this! :)
One Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Well.. there isnt always beauty.. sometimes it dark cold skies... Loved your poem though...
Leiser Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 3:21 PM
Thanks, Silent! :)
Laurie Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Hello Laura … a pleasing sunset poem with your lines matching the time of day - thank you Laura - Lindsay
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:54 PM
Thank you, Lindsay! :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Very pleasurable read Laura, death of the day is an interesting concept, how there is beauty in the dying of the day. Isn't it amazing how even Autumn portends death, of the leaves, but there is such beauty in their demise
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Yes, I agree, John. Like dying to self, but living for God...there is beauty in that...
Green Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 7:59 AM
This was as beautiful as it was enchanting Laura. You have created a scene that floats softly across the page.
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Gondolf Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 6:56 AM
You paint a beautiful picture with this poem, Laura, I love your imagery. All the best. Hugs, John
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, John! :)
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October 18, 2019 at 12:54 AM
For me the start and the finish of the day are my favourite parts.you captured the essence Laura. Blessings Rick.
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Richard! :)
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October 17, 2019 at 11:30 PM
Laura, I like this sunset in the dim light and cricket's song. Very well written. -Richard
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October 18, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Richard! :)
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