Duuude

This dummy had sex without a wrapper. But he really just wanted to tap 'er. He thought he was smart. But now he's lost heart. He's not really feeling all that dapper. Thanks to Andrea Dietrich for the second line. Who knew ha? :)

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2015 3:00:00 PM

LMAO - thanks for a chuckle, my friend

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/3/2015 12:46:00 PM

Funny !!! Oh my !! Laughing out loud here !! Great limerick !!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2015 5:32:00 PM

aha!! you used it. Awesome!!!

Judy Konos

Date: 6/4/2015 9:33:00 PM

I have a favorite new poet...makes me chuckle...very talented...names Robert...

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2015 10:36:00 PM

LOL, to use the word, Andrea, suggested on the bottom. The limerick reminds me of the reason I had my first kid.. :) SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 10:17:00 PM

If you wanted a different line for that second one, You could just say: But he just really wanted to tap 'er. I enjoyed this one!

Robert Johnson
Date: 6/4/2015 8:37:00 AM

Well, thanks. I used it. Gave you a nod.