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Dust Devil Days

A parched wind still circles the dust devils corralling them in funneled fury. The old rooster atop the barn squeaks as the weather changes as do the joints in the old blue jeans. Hard black coffee bubbles on the stove, her apron hangs a memory on the chair, an old screen door shudders, slams shut, an old dog curses the dust. Bowed heads watch as he laces his boots, reaches for that damned hat, sips the last of the coffee runs his fingers across the hanging apron whispers “I love you”, sets off to worship in the shrine of their lives. ©5/7/2018 submitted to – Hillbillies Bybillies and Blowbillies – Poetry contest sponsor – Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 5/9/2018 8:12:00 PM
I can see it, hear it, touch it, smell it, and taste it, John. I can even FEEL it, and I'm a mere male. You've activated all six senses---that's a win in my book...what a poem is supposed to do. Memorable write. It's a FAVE for me. :) Gershon
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:07:00 PM
Lovely image you've written John. The weather changes as do the joints in the old blue jeans. Sadly how true. Good luck. Tom.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2018 5:32:00 PM
hey, tom, who needs the weather channel when ya got knees and hips.....
Date: 5/7/2018 3:10:00 PM
Sounds a lot like my childhood memories, John. Thoroughly enjoyed this one:) I suppose that would make me a hillbilly.
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:32:00 PM
I grew up in the are of Boston known as Mission Hill....so I guess that "could" make me a hillbilly also.
Date: 5/7/2018 7:12:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this (twice), can relate as I've had losses myself, it was thought provoking and has made me think, & about other- spirit....those days! Thank you for sharing such a personal poem, It's nice to know we are not alone, It makes me wonder- it is funny how the brain can play tricks on us hmmm, am rambling here, make a long story short- Thanks John :)
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.

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