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He says that he is going to take my turtle away No longer can I hold it and spend time at play The beauty of the dark turtle shell with the feel The feel of a rock that has been washed by water 'til It is smooth to the touch delicate soft sleek But no_ no scent of that famous plant leek No my turtle is special for he was designed for me To entertain me in my lonely afternoons that be He says that he is going to take it and make soup How can he even think that thought impossible_doupe How can I stop him from doing that what can I do Hide that is what I will do __come out and boo While I'm in hiding I will unwrap the wrapper Quietly and enjoy the turtle that lusious trapper That sugar free Turtle in the famous package The red and brown wax coated that makes rackage That will stop him_ no Turtle soup Nope! Just joy for me he's douped

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats on the win, sara
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:29:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your turle soup win. LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 8/10/2010 12:26:00 AM
Hi Sara :) congrats on your win with this Turtle write of yours-- now I want some of those turtles ;)-- btw, you & me both I do hope to witness those Northern Lights someday :) congrats again -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/9/2010 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Turtle Soup". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:36:00 AM
dha ha ra---lol
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:48:00 AM
congrats on your win with this cute entry
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:03:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in P.D.'s turtle contest with this amazing and entertaining write.. enjoy another win this happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:41:00 AM
Many congratulations Sara on your win in PD's fine contest with this little gem >> James
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:14:00 PM
funny poem...
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Date: 8/3/2010 8:04:00 AM
HI SARA ! Iam a Homeopath Doc ! Idid not know about turtles and its link with the diabetics ! Thanks for sharing ! -Raj
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:03:00 AM
If I borrowed from anyone, let me know..I will put quotation marks around it and give you credit...They have sugar free Turtles now that diabetics can have but of course they are loaded with fat and calories not a good choice for diabetics..Someone's write reminded me of this..Sara
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