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Dunes of Broken Heart

A full moon you blush in the condensed sky Riding the lone cloud I tried to reach you Furtive desire couldn’t grow wings to fly Silver lines formed from your nonchalant hue. You crossed the humble sky that I call mine A turquoise trail you made in me you knew I could discern my love glow in your shine How to preserve the gleam I had no clue. The departing night called the black clouds in Gloom of shade spread on ascetic desert The moon through the dust storm it hadn’t seen Ripples formed on parched dunes of broken heart. Clouds melted, your shallow lake filled my tears I tried to find my drowned love lost for years. Written : January 19, 2018

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/4/2018 8:33:00 PM

Hi Subimal, congratulations for your win in Laura,s contest. Strong imagery is built by your words. An excellent write. This one goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Monday....Mike.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/5/2018 12:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vladislav. I am glad you stopped and liked the poem

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2018 10:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery ...

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/4/2018 8:14:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/3/2018 9:04:00 PM

Congratulations Subimal, on your fantastic win with your beautifully expressed sad sonnet..

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/4/2018 8:14:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/3/2018 4:51:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your fine placement for this beautifully written Sonnet! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/3/2018 12:14:00 PM

Beautiful, Subimal. Congrats on your win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/4/2018 8:13:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/3/2018 10:22:00 AM

This is a heart-melting poem......so lovely and so worthy of a win ! Congratulations to you!!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/4/2018 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations, Carrie for stopping and liking the poem.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/3/2018 9:42:00 AM

oh Subimal, so beautiful. Words touch to deeply when written so beautifully. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/4/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Laura for your nice comments and appreciation.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/12/2018 4:21:00 PM

Such gorgeous imagery Subimal. Excellent use of the required words as they melt into the beauty of your poem. Congratulations on your lovely placement in the contest. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/12/2018 11:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan for your lovely comments.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/12/2018 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Subimal, wonderful write. Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/12/2018 11:02:00 PM

Thank you, Eve.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/12/2018 2:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/12/2018 11:02:00 PM

Thank you, Line.