Dull

dull december clouds roll in silently ~ the sun not coming Submitted on December 19, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE, DECEMBER- WINTER HAIKU OR SENRYU by DEAR HEART – WIISHKOBI ODE - RANKED 3RD

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 7:22:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2019 5:47:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful haiku ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/26/2019 9:38:00 AM

Congrats, dark mood, bright pen

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Peter.

Pratap Roy

Date: 12/25/2019 11:48:00 PM

Congrats....

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thanks, Pratap.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 2:24:00 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Line :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/25/2019 10:02:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine, for your most appreciated visit and wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2019 5:41:00 PM

Well done for this gloomy picture, Line. Congrats on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/24/2019 10:46:00 PM

Yes, must agree there... not my most cheerful. LOL

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/24/2019 12:28:00 PM

Hi Line, Congratulations on your placement. I love the opposing images of "silence heavily." Enjoyed.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/24/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. Most appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/20/2019 11:59:00 AM

Ooh, stop it, I'm freezing here. Enjoyed.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Snuggle up.

Chris Green

Date: 12/19/2019 3:45:00 PM

Even on cloudy days the sun is still there but never as bright as your wonderful poetry my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 6:49:00 PM

My head is starting to swell. LOL

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/19/2019 9:33:00 AM

May be the sun went on holiday.. lol.. Good one..Best wishes in the contest..

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 6:48:00 PM

For sure, a long holiday!