Dull December Clouds

dull december clouds
wallowing across grey skies
~ the sun not coming



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on December 19, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE, DECEMBER- WINTER HAIKU OR SENRYU by DEAR HEART – WIISHKOBI ODE  -  RANKED 3RD
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Roper Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 7:22 PM
Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
La France Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful haiku ~
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.
Iversen  Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:38 AM
Congrats, dark mood, bright pen
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Peter.
Roy Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 11:48 PM
Congrats....
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Thanks, Pratap.
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 2:24 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Line :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, for your most appreciated visit and wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Well done for this gloomy picture, Line. Congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Yes, must agree there... not my most cheerful. LOL
Kauffman Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Hi Line, Congratulations on your placement. I love the opposing images of "silence heavily." Enjoyed.
Gauthier Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Thank you, Sam. Most appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 11:59 AM
Ooh, stop it, I'm freezing here. Enjoyed.
Gauthier Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Thanks, ML. Snuggle up.
Green Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Even on cloudy days the sun is still there but never as bright as your wonderful poetry my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 6:49 PM
My head is starting to swell. LOL
Somadas Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 9:33 AM
May be the sun went on holiday.. lol.. Good one..Best wishes in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 6:48 PM
For sure, a long holiday!
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