Dulcinea

My buttercup bewitched me evermore Those mesmerising eyes of a gazelle Celestial cerulean 'amore' Enamoured I'm by my breathtaking belle I prize the bonny sunshine of my heart She's my pulchritudinous 'querido' Catalyst of my Parnassian art She's like a splendiferous soignée doe The moon can't compete with my 'priyatham' The sun shivers at her angelic touch Together we're in resplendent rhythm She is a noticeable nymph nonesuch My summer's entranced by 'dulcinea' Forever we're entwined, she's my 'jiya' 05.16.2021
**amore - Latin for sweetheart Querido - Spanish/Portuguese for darling Parnassian - poetic Priyatham - Hindi for heartthrob Dulcinea - Spanish for sweetheart Jiya - Hindi for 'life' ***soignée and rhythm - counted as 2 syllables Dulcinea - counted as 4 syllables For John Hamilton's "Summer love sonnet" contest
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Hamilton Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Loved this write Jo, was pleasantly surprised this was you. Enjoyed the fresh feel of the exotic words, just what I was hoping for, well done and congrats on a nice win!
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 12:12 PM
wow, you used so many unusual words and this made for quite the romantic poem, Jo! I think you did a very fine job with your sonnet.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Excellent sonnet with foreign words that make it all the more romantic.
Devonshire Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 12:25 PM
John is sure to love your romantic poem, Jo. I enjoyed reading it and was glad you put the "translations" at the bottom. Truly a delightful poem to read! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Mcintosh Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Lovely as I'm sure it was difficult... a brilliant write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Seeker Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Bahut khoob! Superb write, Jo!
Ibeh Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Bahut achha poem hai! Very romantic write, Jo:-) Good luck in the contest!
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