Dual Personality

In a flash, coals of darkness strike the night,
her teeth grating... pinched by a rage
screaming on walls that resound from her lungs;
her face spitting out a whorl of madness
in a verbal lash of ten or more whips,
mocking all the way down to the veins…

A furnace of rage disconnects her from some
sense of reality:  the raw edge of irreverence
at every turn... panting, cussing, and cutting
sliced words like broken glass, as though
her heart is unaware of her sense of duality.

She taste the tears of  both wrath and liberation,
plunging down the sunken pit in a hazy blur;
until she hears a voice,” it's alright, girl”...
for her borders cannot see the difference
between another time, another place,
where gentle sighs and harsh  language 
cannot blend as she hardly responds.


For John Lawless: Minced Words Contest
6/24/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:49 PM
I really enjoyed this, well in fact we both did! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 5:30 AM
What an excellent piece, congrats on your win Nette. Hugs Rick.
Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 3:31 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats on your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
Delaney Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Nette: Awesome description of passionate rage. Congrats on your placement, dear. SuZ
Canerdy Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Nette, in this powerful poem, you have chillingly described the out-of-control mindset that often results in crimes of passion and life in prison for someone. Congrats on your WELL-deserved win. Janice
Lawless Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Nette, I got a sense of rage, dementia, Alzheimers like entrapment in this one. Thank you for participating in the contest.
Devnath  Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Beautifully expressed the duality. Good luck in the contest my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Ongado Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Pow wow for duality of words-- stinging or swinging depending on one psychological state. Methinks this is astounding!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:24 AM
I like your take on the contest. Impressive entry!
Em Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Stinging, amazing poetry bordering on blind anger and then normalcy. Extraordinary approach to the theme! You didn't mince lines and expression here!
Ashe Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 10:55 PM
This is about real release for me! Such depth Nette! The best to you in this contest!
Conte Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Potent use of words capturing mood swings; quite bipolar in nature. Your poem is brilliant!
Turner Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Another fantastic write, nette. Sometimes it's best to just let it out.
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