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Drying winds, partly cloudy sky No rain coming, here the earth cracks Hurricane floods in places why? Drying winds, partly cloudy sky Clouds are a farce, only amplify Needed moisture, which we now lack Drying winds, partly cloudy sky No rain coming, here the earth cracks

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/6/2022 7:47:00 AM

Sara, a most inspired and talented pen you hold. Here is the affecting truth of your ecological environment. I am quite moved. Triolet form is also new to me and you’ve presented quite a model. xoxo have a good day!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 11:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sally. I appreciate such a kind review of my work. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2022 7:20:00 AM

Hi Sara, You penned a good Triolet. I echo what Suzanne said. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/6/2022 5:17:00 AM

Hi Sara: Wonderful and realistic description of how the sky mocks, promising rain when everywhere is dry. Saw it many times when I lived in Australia.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/6/2022 1:01:00 PM

Deb M is an Australian and I believe Harry Horseman resides there now. I come across a few.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 11:06:00 AM

Interesting fact. On an island in fact. Wow!! Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/6/2022 5:21:00 AM

Yes, Sara: Born in Tasmania. Little island at the southern most tip. SuZ

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 5:20:00 AM

So, you have lived in the land down under. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/5/2022 10:28:00 PM

Such a beautiful Triolet poem dear Sara... Here in India, it's humid as of now, all rain gone in our place and October November will be a bit hot and sultry... Love and respect... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 3:34:00 AM

Anitha, I feel for you if it is hot and humid. The humidity is always rough here in the south in the summer months. Sorry you are dry as well. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/5/2022 9:04:00 PM

Your poem points a gentle finger at the sky to say Why? Why do you mock us? And I don't blame you one bit. May the Heavens hear your plea and pour forth their liquid treasure!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 3:29:00 AM

Gershon, Well, I did not mean it to mock the sky or God. We do get dry here in the fall sometimes then the winter rains begin. We are in need of rain and the weatherman is predicting no rain in sight for another week after this one. I feel for those in Florida who got so much rain at once. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Ann Peck

Date: 10/5/2022 4:29:00 PM

It cracks here, too; sprinkles now and then as forests burn. Your poem tells the sad tale well.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 3:23:00 AM

Ann, I hope you are not in any danger where you live. I have seen the fires going via of TV. Sad to see so much destruction. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2022 1:09:00 PM

I'm sure seeing many great triolet poems around here lately . yet another is this one.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2022 3:20:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I have seen quite a few as well. I think there must be a contest going on using the T form of poetry. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2022 8:07:00 AM

Great form, Sara, it has truly been dry, but I sure doesn't want it to flood.. Last flood it was an inch into coming into my home... that was scary. Blessings friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2022 12:55:00 PM

Thank you for the blessings because I need them. I am sorry your home was so close to flooding. Once a very long time ago, when a hurricane came toward us then turned into a tropical depression there was flooding in our area the year was 1994. It did some damage for us to have to repair. We were not so happy about that. I can't imagine what it is like for those hit by the hurricane. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2022 12:20:00 PM

We need those raindrops, Very nicely penned Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2022 2:28:00 PM

Yes, we do. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/4/2022 6:04:00 AM

You aptly describe the tug and pull…one is flooded…in another part of the earth, rain is desperately needed. The right amount heaven will bring…so for now we wait.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2022 2:28:00 PM

Yes, it seems that is the way it is now, and I guess it always has been, however today with access to news and weather we know more about everything that happens all over the world. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/3/2022 6:55:00 AM

Never when needed, too much when not needed, Still your poem, is wonderful love the form and your wise words.\ Harry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2022 1:34:00 PM

Harry, we still haven't had any rain in our area, but I know it will come in God's right timing. I am glad we don't have crops that need it at this time. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 10/1/2022 5:09:00 PM

Nice Triolet, Sara. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/2/2022 4:29:00 AM

Bill, Your uplifting review refreshes me. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2022 12:42:00 PM

Much enjoyed this longing for rainfall, Sara. We have plenty here in Maryland where I live.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2022 2:04:00 PM

Vijay, I think the hurricane remnants are coming your way if they have not come already. I hope it is gentle in your area. We are still getting wind. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/1/2022 11:29:00 AM

Rain is always needed but we have to be careful not to get wet.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2022 12:18:00 PM

Victor, I like the way you think. We are needing rain in where I live but so many are suffering from flooding from Ian that I don't like to complain. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2022 10:09:00 AM

Excellent use of the triolet, Sara. I didn't have the opportunity to practice this form very often, but I found today's reading to be really enjoyable. Many thanks for sharing this.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2022 10:26:00 AM

Lasaad, I guess you could practice a few Triolets now and perfect them. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/1/2022 8:57:00 AM

A fine triolet, Sara, which asks a pertinent question. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2022 9:34:00 AM

Thank you, Milton. I am glad you enjoyed my work. Sara