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Dry and Barren

So dry and barren, the hills That I walked upon today Stark beauty in death, the hills I clutch at dry grass, my hands Drops of red on parched ground Feeling nothing still, my hands Relentless pushing, the wind Bringing no voices to me The hawk circles, the wind Unable to cry , my eyes As dry as my very soul Sunset gray and tired, my eyes Dry and barren , my heart Empty as each year's promise And yet it beats, my heart 8/26/11..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/15/2011 2:59:00 AM
Barb,you are definitly a poet with a sensitive soul.I read your poem several times and loved it better each time.I really like your style.William.
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:52:00 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:01:00 AM
A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:32:00 PM
wow, Barbara. I think I am drawn to this one the most because of the patterning of its lines and its lyrical effect. it's like an unrymed rhyme if that makes any sense. Awesome! And congrats.
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Date: 8/31/2011 10:28:00 AM
The sadness in this one is what makes this piece. Kudos to you, Barbara!
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:45:00 PM
Congrats BG on an exciting win with this magnificent poetry .. awesome words..
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:31:00 PM
What a sad, heartfelt and emotional poem, Barbara. I haven't seen one of yours for awhile, but this is wonderful writing! Congratulations! Well deserved
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Gut Me" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 5:51:00 PM
Ah this one, I just really loved how this was written! Almost like a song for me and hauntingly vivid in its own way. The relatively short lines, & the repetition of that last phrase in your lines 1 & 3 for each stanza was very effective…it had this almost soothing quality for me that also held some deeper meaning—and I definitely liked how you ended the poem on a hopeful note, that despite all that dryness and barrenness, the hearts still beats….Super congrats on your win, Barbara with this very stirring & thought-provoking piece ^_^!
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Date: 8/27/2011 9:13:00 AM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Barbara. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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