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Drunken Pink Elephants Allegory

Intoxicated pinkish elephants electrified in splendiferous drunkenness surmised surrealistic playgrounds of surround sound echoing laughter & expansivly lit hot air balloons merrily drifting to embrace star-dusted skies' kaleidoscopic enchantment ever wonder, do intoxicated pink elephants hallucinate the same as our own alcoholic delirium

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2016 7:10:00 AM

This one makes me smile!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2016 5:36:00 PM

oh how fun, having our own delusions having hallucinations of their own!! Very creative and descriptive, Paloma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/24/2016 10:26:00 AM

fantasy in a fun mode, paloma... you imagination is on a roll, yes!..huggs

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/24/2016 9:01:00 AM

I'm certain they see pink people and ask the same questions about us:) Be careful, Paloma. Your funny bone is exposed:)

Chris Green

Date: 10/24/2016 8:53:00 AM

One question, why are drunk elephants always pink? That sounds gender specific to me and I'm sure there are just as many blue drunken elephants hanging from chandeliers as there are pink. :) This was funny Paloma, your humor brings many colors to this site.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2016 5:44:00 AM

Great humour Paloma :-) can you imagine having to deal with a drunken elephant lol lol ...makes me so glad I am almost tea total:-) hugs Jan xx

Paloma P
Date: 10/24/2016 7:50:00 AM

Once in a while, my funny bone emerges. I highly doubt pink elephants are teetotalers. :) Cheers Jan!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/24/2016 5:21:00 AM

Very good figures and images ... colours of plurality in interpretation ...

Paloma P
Date: 10/24/2016 5:29:00 AM

Thanks very much Probir, that's what happens when you lose your grip.

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/24/2016 5:13:00 AM

Yes! Some of my best friends are intoxicated elephants. But this is par for a Kaleidoscope mind:) Love it!

Paloma P
Date: 10/24/2016 5:28:00 AM

I'll drink to that Joe, cheers! :) Ha ha you've got some very weird friends buddy.

White Wolf

Date: 10/24/2016 4:52:00 AM

AH, I'm still grinning from ear to ear. Ha, this is the question! Do they? I've got a $50 that says yes. Love it.

Paloma P
Date: 10/24/2016 4:55:00 AM

I won't bet against that, just stay out of their way! ;) Thanks Rick.