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Drunken Moon

fumes from earth rises sends moon into drunken spin... green the new yellow Written 3 July 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:06:00 AM

Seren, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 8:56:00 AM

I enjoyed your winning poem!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:34:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Seren! Congrats on ur win!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 2:59:00 PM

I see the humor here Seren...congrats Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 2:00:00 PM

Hi Serene! I have seen some people's faces turn greenish colour when feeling drunk sick:) We are partly to blame for the moon's dizzy condition. Congrats on your fine win! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2015 12:02:00 AM

Congrats, Seren. I am enjoying seeing all the poems again.

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win! makes me feel dizzy : )

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:58:00 PM

Well done on a quirky Haiku. Seren. Viv x

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:13:00 PM

Seren, good one, however, i did not understand the last line. Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2015 6:00:00 AM

Well when your drunk you say your face turned green hence the moon was green not yellow

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:01:00 PM

nice@-> LINDA <-@

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 2:20:00 PM

oh, that is clever, the new yellow as green!!