Valsa George Poet Limerick

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Drunken Dance

Drunk Sue, leapt onto the ironing board,
In  great vigour swinging both her hands wide.
As on a big stage
Forgetting her age,
Danced in thrill, fell off, hitting her head hard


July.16.2022

Syllables- 10, 10, 5, 5, 10 (HMS)
Limerick Poetry Contest
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Bill Baker July 21, 2022 at 2:34 PM Congrats on the win, Valsa. Looks like she was have the time of her life. Bill

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2022 at 7:04 AM Drunk Sue is great. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2022 at 1:15 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "Drunken Dance" is a fun Limerick write. Maybe more ironing and less drinking will work here. Today, be blessed as you are writing away.................

Tom Cunningham July 17, 2022 at 12:52 AM She's certainly enjoying life to the full dispite the headache lol. Tom

Rico Leffanta July 16, 2022 at 7:06 PM Luckily, she had a, "I've fallen and I can get up" button? Enjoyed! Aloha!

Sotto Poet July 16, 2022 at 5:07 PM It looks like she's having such a great time! Your photo and writing are both really emotive and lovely, Valsa. Best wishes for the contest.

Victor Buhagiar July 16, 2022 at 8:48 AM Wow. Best go to ER and check her head.

Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2022 at 7:21 AM LOL!

Vijay Pandit July 16, 2022 at 7:15 AM She's having a good time! Lovely expressive write, as is your photo, Valsa.

Anil Deo July 16, 2022 at 6:36 AM Hope the Humpty Dumpty Hospital put Sue together again. Shalom shalom Sis Valsa G.

Unseeking Seeker July 16, 2022 at 12:44 AM Good one! Valsa George July 16, 2022 at 4:10 AM Thank you dear friend !