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Drunk Sun

Moon hatches star eggs; she cackles to get him home. Drunk Sun roams around. *3rd Place* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 30, 2020) Sept. 22, 2020 Paint A Picture - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 10/1/2020 8:32:00 AM
Nicely done Newton, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/1/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph!!
Date: 10/1/2020 5:52:00 AM
Love it Newton! Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/1/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda!!
Date: 10/1/2020 4:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win,Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!
Date: 9/26/2020 8:08:00 PM
That sun! -- Funny image, Newton! G.L. in the contest, Gershon
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Date: 9/26/2020 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for this great comment!!
Date: 9/24/2020 6:24:00 PM
this is a cute metaphor!
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Date: 9/24/2020 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 9/23/2020 11:42:00 AM
- ... star eggs ... and drunk sun ... a great mix, Newton :) - Love it :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/23/2020 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for this lovely comment, Anne-Lise!!

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