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shopping.. it's a narcotic for prison world

I’m in LOVE - drunk love, look stupid love - and I expect a harsh trial. A hurricane is due - the sky is coldly-gray, and the wind is fierce. Tech issues have school on hold and walking is a peak-experience. Then - the blue gray truck rounds the corner and I’m hit with Christmas-like joy. I LOVE shopping, like a lush loves drink or a gambler loves risk. It’s nigh erotic. How can YOU resist it? Please - tell me your secret??!! ** Amazon trucks are blue gray =]

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Date: 9/21/2020 5:43:00 AM
Meaning. Stoicism. Minimalism. Far superior to fluff and stuff.
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Anais vionet
Date: 9/21/2020 5:50:00 AM
I agree (Minimalism) - that's why I love the Senryu poem form. - thank you!
Date: 9/20/2020 11:24:00 AM
Buy Amazon shares so you can enjoy both sides of the scene! Aloha! Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/22/2020 12:10:00 PM
Bezos reportedly earned $18-Billion on Monday, so perhaps it is time to remind your parents that your allowance needs to be brought up to current standards? Aloha! Rico
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Anais vionet
Date: 9/20/2020 1:56:00 PM
Rico, you're a GENIOUS! That's the only way I could enjoy it more... IF I could afford even ONE share of stock at $2954 per share. (Not with MY allowance.) Nice thought though.