Drunk Driving Isn't Beautiful

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Horrific Traffic Accident Rollover Smoking and Burning Vehicle Lying on its Roof in the Middle of the Road after Collision. Daytime Crash Scene with Damaged Car.

Write Eight Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest Constance La France Wrongfully wheel with wanton wills which wastefully works By Author In the aftermath of his tragic fate When adding two plus two is too late I don't understand drunk drivers Why risk it all and leave survivors Now he's resting at a funeral home Lifeless because of a unwise syndrome Yet yesterday he's weaving on a thread And today he's knitted his fate, he's dead

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2025 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Connie. A drunk driver killed a friend of mine. Your words resonated with my heart. Thank you for this message. Blessings.

Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2025 2:45:00 AM

important message, great verse, congratulations

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/30/2025 9:13:00 PM

Nice message here dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/30/2025 6:09:00 PM

This time it worked against him. I hope he didn't take anyone else with him. Congratulations Connie! :)

Karen Jones

Date: 3/27/2025 10:24:00 PM

Important message! Thanks for sharing! Too I wrote on drunk driving and added music. It’s in my best poems list called Repost Of Because You Drink & Drive if you want to listen. I did sing but didn’t play the music. Good luck in the contest!

Tom Woody

Date: 3/27/2025 3:34:00 PM

People always think it will never happen to them. Worse yet is when they destroy the lives of others. So sad. When I was a dumb teen I used to drive home so drunk or high I don't know how I got from point A to point B. Somehow I survived