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Drunk Driving Isn't Beautiful

Write Eight Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
Constance La France

Wrongfully wheel with wanton wills which wastefully works 
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In the aftermath of his tragic fate
When adding two plus two is too late
I don't understand drunk drivers
Why risk it all and leave survivors
Now he's resting at a funeral home
Lifeless because of a unwise syndrome
Yet yesterday he's weaving on a thread
And today he's knitted his fate, he's dead

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Sam Kauffman March 31, 2025 at 10:57 AM Congratulations on your win, Connie. A drunk driver killed a friend of mine. Your words resonated with my heart. Thank you for this message. Blessings.

Terry Miller March 31, 2025 at 2:45 AM important message, great verse, congratulations

thriveni c mysore March 30, 2025 at 9:13 PM Nice message here dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Linda Alice Fowler March 30, 2025 at 6:09 PM This time it worked against him. I hope he didn't take anyone else with him. Congratulations Connie! :)

Karen Jones March 27, 2025 at 10:24 PM Important message! Thanks for sharing! Too I wrote on drunk driving and added music. It’s in my best poems list called Repost Of Because You Drink & Drive if you want to listen. I did sing but didn’t play the music. Good luck in the contest!