Drugs Next

DRUGS NEXT the box is open too many no nos have leaked and been accepted gone the wisdom of ages everything legalized

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/9/2012 6:55:00 AM

I'm thinking about this one.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/6/2012 3:26:00 PM

A thought provoking write here Daver; thank you for posting,, its good to get as many angles as you can to view the way things are going.." I think this is a valid observation. and well done in this short form..)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2012 9:11:00 AM

a revelation, indeed, daver.. let's hope this is not the sign of the times when everything is licentious... fine write and an eye-opener!.:) huggs!

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 7/6/2012 1:44:00 AM

A great tanka indeed, as Doreen Wright said

Doreen Wright

Date: 7/5/2012 9:18:00 PM

EVERYTHING LEGALIZED!! Great tanka!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/5/2012 6:56:00 PM

Hey Daver! When I was little my mom used to crush aspirin between spoons and add sugar, if we were ill. Was alright I suppose, we always got to take it with gingerale!:) Have a great night, best to you and yours! love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2012 8:38:00 PM

Do you think Mary jane is really a gateway drug? I have never tried drugs. Always wondered about them!! Hope you had a happy fourth, my friend. I just laid out to write haiku , organized my house and saw a dollar movie!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 8:40:00 PM

Daver, funny you should bring this up. I know it sounds odd coming from a Mormon, but I believe marijuana should be legalized. it kills a lot less people than alcohol does and yet we permit alcohol to be freely sold to adults. Now that is just not fair!!! (also, I think I might be needing its medicinal properties as I my old age brings more woe. haha)