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Slightly Stirred But Never Shaken

====================== If I have just one more drink (slightly stirred but never shaken), I can drown them. They will sink, if I have just one more drink. This time they'll stay down, I think and for once, I will awaken (if I have just one more drink), slightly stirred, but never shaken. ===================== 08/15/2015

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Date: 9/14/2015 12:58:00 PM
Hi Lycia,, Congratulations on your win, SKAT
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Date: 9/12/2015 5:19:00 PM
Great triolet, Lycia! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 10:26:00 PM
Hi Kim, thank you!
Date: 9/12/2015 7:05:00 AM
Powerful words Lycia n a superb win! Big congrats!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Sharma!
Date: 9/11/2015 2:20:00 PM
Very powerful triolet Lycia - I stick to tea and still can't drown them out:-( hugs jan xx
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/14/2015 10:24:00 PM
Good girl, I'm with you there...!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 6:26:00 PM
I rarely drink alcohol:-) hugs jan xx
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/11/2015 5:38:00 PM
Just put a shot of Scotch in it, honey - you'll be just fine... Heh heh
Date: 8/14/2015 2:48:00 PM
Hehe :)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/14/2015 4:02:00 PM
Ha! You funny, Fox!
Date: 8/13/2015 2:57:00 PM
if I drank out the voices in my head i'd be in rehab lol, enjoyed your triolet, Luv Skat
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/13/2015 6:00:00 PM
Keep tryin' honey, you'll get there! heh heh. Thank you, SKAT. xoxo
Date: 8/9/2015 3:47:00 PM
The drink...A friend in solitude. 7!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/9/2015 4:10:00 PM
Hi Hannington. Perhaps you know my friend Jose.... Jose Cuervo? Heh heh
Date: 8/9/2015 11:52:00 AM
you like martinis well I like yack....that's not how it's spelled but forget about that....I don't try to drink them away because they will never go....One Is God, the other is satan, that's all I know....
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/14/2015 4:05:00 PM
Well, I've always known you were a great man...but I see you're also my greatest fan!
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Eric Boddie
Date: 8/10/2015 7:16:00 PM
nicely done with that pen of yours....it is one I have come to adore....;)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/9/2015 4:07:00 PM
One's on the left and one's on the right...one's wearing red, the other's in white...thanks to you, I now know who they were...one is the Lord and one's Lucifur!
Date: 8/8/2015 2:04:00 PM
Beautiful pen a 7, I think we all at one time or another tried to drown out the voices but like Broken wing mentioned it never works. Hugs eve
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/8/2015 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Eve, your positive comments a greatly appreciated. xoxo
Date: 8/8/2015 2:41:00 AM
Pensive triolet. What are the voices at night... Interesting write here, my dear. How are you doing?
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/8/2015 3:55:00 PM
Well hello my little Night Voice! Heh heh. Actually, this poem was written for the 'Mental Illness' contest but of course I was like one day too late for entry. Boo! But I any reason to write a triolet is fine with me... I've been trying to keep up with congrats on all the great wins by everone but it's hard! Keep checking your comments, though
Date: 8/7/2015 6:51:00 PM
Lycia, I think nothing will drown night voices, a deep write and thanks for visiting my rainforest poem
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/7/2015 7:26:00 PM
You got it, my Dear. Keep em coming! xoxo

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