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Driving of a Busy Mind On a Busy Road

One hand on steering The other hand steering beloved's knee, One ear on cell phone, The other ear listening to loud music, One foot on accelerator, The other on the brake. Eyes on female pedestrians, If a waving hand is seen for a lift Stop the car, pile up freely The more, the merrier Conversation with someone in the car Well I declare, welcome to India! +++ September 8, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Where I Declare by Judy Konos

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Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 4:59:00 AM

Awesome and sweet

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 9/25/2014 5:08:00 AM

thanks for the ride Dr Ram :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2014 10:32:00 AM

An awesome take in this contest...LINDA

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/16/2014 5:56:00 PM

I enjoyed this one, congrats on it being the top of the top winners list :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/14/2014 5:37:00 PM

I guess I won't be driving in India. Great win. Congratulations,. Love, Joyce

John Lawless

Date: 9/14/2014 8:17:00 AM

Damn!! That brought back memories. Visited India in the '70's. I can only imagine it is more chaotic now. Enjoyed the trip.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 9/14/2014 3:37:00 AM

Taking the reader a good ride on Indian roads that I familiar.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/13/2014 2:44:00 PM

Kudos for another magnificent win! Congratulations!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2014 12:15:00 PM

great fun write Dr Mehta - it applies in the Isle of man too! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/13/2014 11:24:00 AM

And back again wid big congrats on ur top place win Dr Ram! Awesome poem indeed!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/13/2014 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations :) Love and prayers and God bless you. Wonderful write.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/13/2014 10:37:00 AM

Haha ha. Such funny well deserved top win Dr. Mehta. Congratulations

Judy Konos

Date: 9/13/2014 9:06:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/13/2014 9:34:00 PM

Hi, Judy, it is always a pleasure to participate in your interesting contests. Thanks for the appreciation

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/10/2014 10:20:00 AM

Quite a funny amusing write Dr. Ram describing the wonders of the typical driving pleasure of India. If someone can drive in different cities of India he/she can drive anything on any planet without any problem. My best wishes for your contest. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 3:56:00 PM

I love this one. It is educational and just plain fun,

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/8/2014 4:25:00 PM

Here we have trees, deer and dirt roads. I drive 35 miles one way to work and never see another car, or any of them distracting female pedestrians. Good luck in the contest :) hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 9/8/2014 3:37:00 PM

lol....same in Chicago...welcome to the technology age

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/8/2014 10:41:00 AM

Nice write Dr Ram! Gl in contest! A lil typo error with brake sir!

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/8/2014 11:48:00 AM

Thanks for the alert, Dr. Upma