Driving Emotions

Messy is spilling her drinks in my car
Curious keeps asking me questions
Bossy is telling me ways to go 
Because unorganized just lost our directions.

Impatient is complaining she’s tired of waiting 
At the red light she’s telling me to go
Vain just took my rear view mirror
To brush her hair real slow.

Excited is jumping up and down in his seat
While discouraged keeps telling him to keep calm 
Talkative is telling me a bunch of nothings
While annoying keeps tapping my arm.

I’m on this road, with a bunch of emotions
And I’m lost between my routes
I stop the car in the middle of no where 
And I yell “EVERYONE GET OUT”.

“I can’t keep driving in this car full of emotions
And I don’t even know where we are”.
They all start to snicker, I turn around
Sneaky just stole the car.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 30, 2015 at 6:54 PM
CORENNE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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April 25, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Hi Corenne, Congratulations on your Humorous Poetry contest win :) LINDA
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April 24, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Thanks everybody <3 Appreciated :)
Lindley Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Congrats on your fine win..
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 7:01 PM
made me giggle - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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April 22, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Congrats on your humorous winning work..Sara
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April 22, 2015 at 1:48 PM
I love this humorous write, :) a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings and hugs Eve
Roberts Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Well done , placed where it should be at the top.....Seren
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April 22, 2015 at 8:41 AM
ha! this is hilarious and very worthy of a top placement in the contest! congratulation...
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April 22, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Corenne, I often wonder how, and why, we get all those "clowns" in one car. Pretty funny write, thanks for the laugh
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