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Driving Emotions

Messy is spilling her drinks in my car Curious keeps asking me questions Bossy is telling me ways to go Because unorganized just lost our directions. Impatient is complaining she’s tired of waiting At the red light she’s telling me to go Vain just took my rear view mirror To brush her hair real slow. Excited is jumping up and down in his seat While discouraged keeps telling him to keep calm Talkative is telling me a bunch of nothings While annoying keeps tapping my arm. I’m on this road, with a bunch of emotions And I’m lost between my routes I stop the car in the middle of no where And I yell “EVERYONE GET OUT”. “I can’t keep driving in this car full of emotions And I don’t even know where we are”. They all start to snicker, I turn around Sneaky just stole the car.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 6:54:00 PM
CORENNE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:29:00 PM
Hi Corenne, Congratulations on your Humorous Poetry contest win :) LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thanks everybody <3 Appreciated :)
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Date: 4/22/2015 9:23:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win..
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:01:00 PM
made me giggle - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your humorous winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:48:00 PM
I love this humorous write, :) a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings and hugs Eve
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:46:00 PM
Well done , placed where it should be at the top.....Seren
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Date: 4/22/2015 8:41:00 AM
ha! this is hilarious and very worthy of a top placement in the contest! congratulation...
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Date: 4/22/2015 8:32:00 AM
Corenne, I often wonder how, and why, we get all those "clowns" in one car. Pretty funny write, thanks for the laugh
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