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For Robert James Liguori's Joe Bonamassa Or Black Country Communion Poetry Contest

(inspired by Joe Bonamassa's "Mountain Time") Drivin’ to you, Babe, I’m drivin’ to you. Without you, my Sweet, I just feel so blue. Drivin’ to you, Babe, I’m headin’ out west. There’s nobody better; for me, you’re the best! Drivin’ to you, Babe, ‘coz I’m in love deep, no stops did I make this whole time to sleep. Bridge: The last stretch of highway’s coming up next. The air’s feeling fresher and I’m feelin’ free. I picture you, Babe, with your cute funny grin. Soon that sweet grin you’ll be givin’ to ME. Your eyes will be shining like sun in blue sky. Can’t wait to see my sweet honey pie. Drivin’ to you, Babe, and I’m drivin’ fast as mountains and green fields I go flyin’ past! Drivin’ to you, Babe, and Sweetie, I swear I’m gonna go crazy if you aren’t there. Drivin’ to you, Babe, the coast I now see. Oh, Babe, don’t be late. Please be there for me.

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Date: 1/24/2024 2:03:00 PM
Great entry Andrea. Top podium winners were so close in excellence. Congrats.
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win dear andrea well deserved
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:15:00 PM
Love the romance. Have fun on the coast.
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:53:00 PM
This is so cool.... ! I can sense your enthusiasm at the prospect of meeting your cutie pie! Very lyrical and sounds like a beautiful lullaby !
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:35:00 PM
So light and breezy. Driving across country, windows down, hair flying... Oh to be your sweet honey pie.
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:48:00 PM
Really very very cute. It feels really good to read something positive like this!!
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:05:00 PM
I admire your ability to create such an awesome lyrical poem. Outstanding! Best wishes for the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:50:00 AM
Nice lyrics Andrea, I do not know this artist, but you seem to have written a great song.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:07:00 AM
Excellent lyrics Andrea, you rose well to the challenge. Best wishes for the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/8/2024 9:54:00 AM
Your composition exhibits a truly distinctive and exceptional lyrical quality, complemented flawlessly by the harmonious melody. Exceptional work! Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:21:00 AM
You should submit this wonderful poem to someone who deals with spirituality. Hugs. Hope your husband is better.
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:05:00 AM
Great lyric and the melody matches the music perfectly! Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/7/2024 11:57:00 PM
Oh you wrote lyrics!! Excellent dear andrea. Iv been listening to his songs too and found a song i love . “Driving towards daylight” love that song so much. Im thinkin of writing a poem for that. I love how yours have a lyrical touch which fits so perfectly. I guess this isnt the first lyric you’ve written can see that in your write. Best wishes for the contest. Nailed it
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