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Dripping Words

shattered and tattered are my wings and forlorn is my trembling bleeding soul I am crushed and humbled and torn apart for life has left me weeping and lost have followed the thread of my life and each fragile treasure found is precious and twining through the chapters of my journey every sadness is a poem to be written the thread leads me down a winding road to names engraved in stone for all eternity but, fear not for my soul dear friends for each sadness has given my soul a voice for the pain to drip from my pen oh, listen to my dripping, dripping words _________________________ July 15, 2021 Poetry/Verse/dripping words Copyright Protected ID 07-1372-363-15 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand July 16 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/16/2021 First Place

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/17/2021 12:39:00 PM

Constance, this lovely poem flows with the emotions of grief and heartache. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2021 8:26:00 AM

Kim, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/15/2021 4:24:00 PM

only you know the depth of your pain if as mine a pen can only describe it, you describe it well, dear poet

Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2021 10:39:00 PM

Frederic, thank you so much for the comment, appreciate ~peace and tranquility _Constance

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/15/2021 3:05:00 PM

Writing from the heart and soul...Well done.

Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2021 10:40:00 PM

Arturo, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2021 10:44:00 AM

A very effective and emotive write. Thanks as well for your visit.

Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2021 10:47:00 AM

Richard, thanks for the comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/15/2021 10:42:00 AM

Hello Constance, i feel the grief in this poem it is very strong. Love and Sernity. Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2021 3:30:00 PM

Hello Constance, you are welcome my friend.Peace & tranquility. - Darlene

Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2021 10:47:00 AM

Darlene, thank you for the visit and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance