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Drip Drop Water drop cascades under sapphire afterglow Undoing 4 month deprivations Muffled moans surround crimson fireplace Crackling of fire Thrusts of skin Retinal vibrations shutter her pilot light deep within She ascended to blue moon heights As embers of his inferno Bow in collective unison Maddening grips His fingertips draw triangular markings Hugging curvature’s hip Gentle bites on lower lip He tackles her wanton hands against waterbed foundations Her strengthened pupils reach out for 3rd eye clarity. She asks for his dance under aggressive whisper As he dips Inside Slow motion Salsa bends of her will She crosses legs marking “X” against his spot His relinquished hands Slalom her vocal chords toward accentuated heavens He exorcised her trembling inner thighs From collapsing octaves With eloquent, muted exhales His hand reaches her cheek His mouth descending towards her breast “My lady, put that lighter down, Let me be your cigarette.” Drip Drop ©11/19/2013 A Scorcher for Charlotte's contest. (Update: Tied for 2nd place. Nice!)

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Date: 9/11/2015 8:47:00 AM
Yowza!!! I'm sorry I missed this contest way back when. The passion and sensuality in this morning are tangible. Fanning myself right now... hehe
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Date: 9/11/2015 9:18:00 AM
LOL! You're welcome!!! :D All mornings should start this way, true story! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUU, Heather!
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Date: 9/11/2015 8:48:00 AM
And, of course, by "morning," I meant "poem" haha. See? You boggled my mind that much :P
Date: 12/8/2013 4:16:00 PM
Oh YES, I fully expected to see THIS one on the winners list. BIG congrats
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Date: 12/9/2013 9:16:00 AM
Thanks very much, Andrea. :)
Date: 12/8/2013 11:18:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner. Damn fine writing... Jack
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Date: 12/9/2013 9:15:00 AM
I kindly appreciate that, Jack. :) Thanks so much!
Date: 12/8/2013 8:53:00 AM
An excellent passionate poem my dear friend Drake. Thank u so much for sharing & my biggest hearty congratulations on your great win! Cheers & hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:09:00 AM
Hi & thank you, Leonora! Cheers to you too! =)
Date: 12/7/2013 10:22:00 PM
I'm not at all surprised that this did so well in the contest!! Ouch !!!! So hot It burned me again !!! lol !!
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:08:00 AM
And you, my dear, got 1st place which was entirely well deserving. Thank you so much for that, Carrie.
Date: 12/7/2013 7:26:00 PM
hot stuff Drake congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:07:00 AM
I'm very glad you enjoyed, Shadow. :) Thanks so much!
Date: 12/7/2013 7:19:00 PM
Not surprised to see you here! Congratulations Drake..:-) :-) :-)
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Donna. You're very kind. :)
Date: 12/7/2013 5:40:00 PM
How could it not win ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM
=) That's sweet. Thank you, Debbie.
Date: 12/7/2013 5:26:00 PM
a most impressive modernistic free verse poem here, drake, great innovative use of language - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:06:00 AM
Awesome. Hi & thank you very much, Charlotte. It was an enjoyable contest.
Date: 12/1/2013 4:58:00 PM
Is this for the scorching contest..You re burning the page.Passionate..ardent..effervescent..and excellent.Charlotte pls get your fire extnguisher : ) : )
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Date: 12/1/2013 5:33:00 PM
LOL, so cute. Yes, this is for the contest. Thank you so much, Charmaine!
Date: 11/29/2013 4:56:00 PM
Hi Drake, came over to see if you have a new offering. I hope your day is going well.
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Date: 12/1/2013 5:32:00 PM
Tomorrow I'll have something. :)
Date: 11/29/2013 1:04:00 PM
you got mall !..:)
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Date: 12/1/2013 5:32:00 PM
I responded. ;-)
Date: 11/29/2013 6:57:00 AM
what a picture painted with your words great write!
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Date: 11/29/2013 6:58:00 AM
Hi & thank you much, Joe!
Date: 11/27/2013 8:57:00 PM
Somemore great comments Drake!
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:57:00 PM
Agreed! :)
Date: 11/26/2013 3:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your verse this afternoon. Now I need a cold shower ;) Light & Love
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Date: 11/26/2013 3:10:00 PM
Hey Debbie! :) Ha, enjoy your shower! Thanks very much!
Date: 11/26/2013 8:40:00 AM
Love the "crime noir" ending! And thanks for stopping by....felt yer disbelief Sun! I tried 1//1/1/1 to let you connect me, to no avail! Good thing the first time, my mouth wuz full of gold potatoes fried in Italian Olive Oil with Chili Peppers! Happy Thanksgiving, my dear friend! Jimbo
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:01:00 AM
JIMBO, SIR!!! =D Thank you so much for that & for your understanding too! =) LOL, full of gold potatoes? I'd have LOVED to have heard that. Happy Gobble Day to you too!!!
Date: 11/25/2013 7:11:00 PM
Haha...OMG...I'm seriously laughing my *** off over what nette said about needing a smoke!!!! It's that HHOOTT ...SMOOKKIINN!!!! Could enter this in the playin' with fire one too!!!
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:00:00 AM
LOL! Fire can be fun...in very , very small & contained doses. :) Thank you so much, Donna.
Date: 11/25/2013 11:59:00 AM
SIMPLY AMAZING!! And thanks for commenting on my poem too! You are so talented Drake!
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:30:00 PM
Hey, Elissa!! You stopped by! Very cool of you! =D Thanks very much!
Date: 11/24/2013 8:55:00 PM
oh my Drake...this one was like foreplay at it's finest...teasing through your sensual images...luring the reader in...wow... I see this one hitting the winner's list for sure!
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:26:00 PM
Yay for foreplay!!! =D Whether it wins or not, it affected everybody who commented here. I'm entirely ok with that. :) Thank you so much, Sandra!
Date: 11/24/2013 9:06:00 AM
Hey, Drake, you know we're a bunch of single ladies on here. This is pure torture, my friend. WHEW!!!! I'm faving this one to read over and over again. Greedy, huh? Licia :-)
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Date: 11/24/2013 9:11:00 AM
LOL! Is that so? I have met (not personally of course) only two single ladies here. Maybe the others are just saying they're not single so I don't approach them? lol Either way, thank you so much. I'm grateful for that. =D
Date: 11/23/2013 2:18:00 PM
Wowza! It just got very HOT in here. So vivid and intense I felt like a peeping creeper. Truly amazing Drake!
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Date: 11/23/2013 3:35:00 PM
That is just an awesome thing to read. =) Here's a bucket of cold water for you. Thanks so much, Sarai.
Date: 11/23/2013 9:39:00 AM
Um..............yea! I'd comment, but I'm...SHY! Bits lower lip! ;) ;) Bits that I liked....I'll keep to myself..but sizzle sizzle sizzle.....
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Date: 11/23/2013 12:31:00 PM
LOL! Right, Eileen...right... =P Thanks very much!
Date: 11/23/2013 9:26:00 AM
Enjoying the fun comments, I also enjoyed rereading this beauty. Have a great weekend Drake.
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Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM
Hola & thanks again, Richard!
Date: 11/23/2013 8:58:00 AM
You zipped right past scorcher to a three alarm. Call out the fire brigades!!!
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Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM
LOL! The roof is on fire! =D Great to see you here, Monterey!
Date: 11/23/2013 12:03:00 AM
This is one serious sizzler, my friend. Smokin' Jack
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Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM
Many, many thanks, Jack! =D
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