Drip, Drop

Drip

Drop

Water drop cascades under sapphire afterglow
Undoing 4 month deprivations

Muffled moans surround crimson fireplace

Crackling of fire
Thrusts of skin
Retinal vibrations shutter her pilot light deep within

She ascended to blue moon heights
As embers of his inferno
Bow in collective unison

Maddening grips

His fingertips draw triangular markings
Hugging curvature’s hip

Gentle bites on lower lip
He tackles her wanton hands against waterbed foundations

Her strengthened pupils reach out for 3rd eye clarity.

She asks for his dance under aggressive whisper
As he dips
Inside

Slow motion Salsa bends of her will
She crosses legs marking “X” against his spot

His relinquished hands
Slalom her vocal chords toward accentuated heavens

He exorcised her trembling inner thighs
From collapsing octaves

With eloquent, muted exhales
His hand reaches her cheek
His mouth descending towards her breast

“My lady, put that lighter down,
Let me be your cigarette.”

Drip

Drop

©11/19/2013
A Scorcher for Charlotte's contest. (Update: Tied for 2nd place. Nice!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ober Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Yowza!!! I'm sorry I missed this contest way back when. The passion and sensuality in this morning are tangible. Fanning myself right now... hehe
Tacito Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 9:18 AM
LOL! You're welcome!!! :D All mornings should start this way, true story! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUU, Heather!
Ober Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 8:48 AM
And, of course, by "morning," I meant "poem" haha. See? You boggled my mind that much :P
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Oh YES, I fully expected to see THIS one on the winners list. BIG congrats
Tacito Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Thanks very much, Andrea. :)
Jordan Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 11:18 AM
I knew this would be a winner. Damn fine writing... Jack
Tacito Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 9:15 AM
I kindly appreciate that, Jack. :) Thanks so much!
Gasun Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:53 AM
An excellent passionate poem my dear friend Drake. Thank u so much for sharing & my biggest hearty congratulations on your great win! Cheers & hugs! love lots, Leonora
Tacito Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Hi & thank you, Leonora! Cheers to you too! =)
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 10:22 PM
I'm not at all surprised that this did so well in the contest!! Ouch !!!! So hot It burned me again !!! lol !!
Tacito Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:08 AM
And you, my dear, got 1st place which was entirely well deserving. Thank you so much for that, Carrie.
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:26 PM
hot stuff Drake congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Tacito Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:07 AM
I'm very glad you enjoyed, Shadow. :) Thanks so much!
Jones Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:19 PM
Not surprised to see you here! Congratulations Drake..:-) :-) :-)
Tacito Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Thanks so much, Donna. You're very kind. :)
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 5:40 PM
How could it not win ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:06 AM
=) That's sweet. Thank you, Debbie.
Puddifoot Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 5:26 PM
a most impressive modernistic free verse poem here, drake, great innovative use of language - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Tacito Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Awesome. Hi & thank you very much, Charlotte. It was an enjoyable contest.
Chircop Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Is this for the scorching contest..You re burning the page.Passionate..ardent..effervescent..and excellent.Charlotte pls get your fire extnguisher : ) : )
Tacito Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 5:33 PM
LOL, so cute. Yes, this is for the contest. Thank you so much, Charmaine!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Hi Drake, came over to see if you have a new offering. I hope your day is going well.
Tacito Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 5:32 PM
Tomorrow I'll have something. :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 1:04 PM
you got mall !..:)
Tacito Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 5:32 PM
I responded. ;-)
Sergi Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 6:57 AM
what a picture painted with your words great write!
Tacito Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Hi & thank you much, Joe!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Somemore great comments Drake!
Tacito Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 10:57 PM
Agreed! :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 3:02 PM
I enjoyed reading your verse this afternoon. Now I need a cold shower ;) Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Hey Debbie! :) Ha, enjoy your shower! Thanks very much!
Goff Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Love the "crime noir" ending! And thanks for stopping by....felt yer disbelief Sun! I tried 1//1/1/1 to let you connect me, to no avail! Good thing the first time, my mouth wuz full of gold potatoes fried in Italian Olive Oil with Chili Peppers! Happy Thanksgiving, my dear friend! Jimbo
Tacito Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 9:01 AM
JIMBO, SIR!!! =D Thank you so much for that & for your understanding too! =) LOL, full of gold potatoes? I'd have LOVED to have heard that. Happy Gobble Day to you too!!!
Jones Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Haha...OMG...I'm seriously laughing my *** off over what nette said about needing a smoke!!!! It's that HHOOTT ...SMOOKKIINN!!!! Could enter this in the playin' with fire one too!!!
Tacito Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 9:00 AM
LOL! Fire can be fun...in very , very small & contained doses. :) Thank you so much, Donna.
Maes Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 11:59 AM
SIMPLY AMAZING!! And thanks for commenting on my poem too! You are so talented Drake!
Tacito Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Hey, Elissa!! You stopped by! Very cool of you! =D Thanks very much!
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 8:55 PM
oh my Drake...this one was like foreplay at it's finest...teasing through your sensual images...luring the reader in...wow... I see this one hitting the winner's list for sure!
Tacito Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Yay for foreplay!!! =D Whether it wins or not, it affected everybody who commented here. I'm entirely ok with that. :) Thank you so much, Sandra!
Hendricks Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Hey, Drake, you know we're a bunch of single ladies on here. This is pure torture, my friend. WHEW!!!! I'm faving this one to read over and over again. Greedy, huh? Licia :-)
Tacito Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 9:11 AM
LOL! Is that so? I have met (not personally of course) only two single ladies here. Maybe the others are just saying they're not single so I don't approach them? lol Either way, thank you so much. I'm grateful for that. =D
Virden Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 2:18 PM
Wowza! It just got very HOT in here. So vivid and intense I felt like a peeping creeper. Truly amazing Drake!
Tacito Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 3:35 PM
That is just an awesome thing to read. =) Here's a bucket of cold water for you. Thanks so much, Sarai.
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Um..............yea! I'd comment, but I'm...SHY! Bits lower lip! ;) ;) Bits that I liked....I'll keep to myself..but sizzle sizzle sizzle.....
Tacito Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:31 PM
LOL! Right, Eileen...right... =P Thanks very much!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Enjoying the fun comments, I also enjoyed rereading this beauty. Have a great weekend Drake.
Tacito Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Hola & thanks again, Richard!
Sirak Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 8:58 AM
You zipped right past scorcher to a three alarm. Call out the fire brigades!!!
Tacito Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM
LOL! The roof is on fire! =D Great to see you here, Monterey!
Jordan Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:03 AM
This is one serious sizzler, my friend. Smokin' Jack
Tacito Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Many, many thanks, Jack! =D
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