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Drip

Spilling from the lintel, a pitcher saves the ice from anonymity. Rafters creak, the sounds of winter rattle through the cabin, loudly, eerily. Memories of dead and gone, whistles of wind, the monotony whispers and drags through the days like a chilling lament. Hours burns so slowly, an ember refusing to ebb, reminiscences stutter and fade, he is chilled to the bone. Evenings and mornings now bleed with the same deep regret; losing his feeling, his heart is as hard as a stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/22/2009 8:46:00 AM
So very beautiful, Keith. I am amazed at how much intensity and gorgeous language you pack into such a short poem. I love this: "an ember refusing to ebb, reminiscences stutter and fade, he is chilled to the bone. Evenings and mornings now bleed with the same deep regret." You outdid yourself again, this is AMAZING. Love from Mick =]
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Date: 6/21/2009 8:47:00 PM
This is set up beautifully in the first stanza..love it. BG
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Date: 6/21/2009 2:39:00 AM
Heart resembles A stone-->Go Revenge!(Be Ware Can be Poisonous)
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Date: 6/21/2009 1:29:00 AM
One is always reminded, and there is no escape from one's pitfalls in life. Good write; Sean
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Date: 6/20/2009 10:12:00 PM
achingly beautiful! Keith! what an excellent protrayal of regret, jim
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Date: 6/20/2009 10:03:00 PM
What an amazing poem. The title is appropriate in so many ways! Great write Keith! ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/20/2009 8:53:00 PM
Oh, stoned hearts due to excess in button smashing and ribbon casting; I like this poem, great one to read outloud with a different voice from one's own; thanks a lot for the experience!!!=D=D
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