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Drinking and Riding

I may have had one or two too many In the cab my head was spinning plenty Thought I may be in need of nurse Too late I puked inside my purse Saved on cleaning fine just paid the twenty AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on March 5, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/7/2019 1:08:00 AM

HA! LOL I hope it was a clean $20

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 1:28:00 AM

LOL come to think of it, my husband obviously paid the bill. I have to give more details of this true story!! I was at a military ceremony where I was listening to speeches with my back to my table. I had absolutely NO IDEA that a server was constantly refilling my glass of wine!!!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2019 9:47:00 PM

Hey, Line! This is hilarious, yet still wryly understated. What an expertly done limerick! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2019 10:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. This is my most challenging form.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/5/2019 11:14:00 PM

A jaunty little limerick that had me green around my gills.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 11:17:00 PM

LOL thanks, Caren.