Drifts

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Drifts Pen to paper, sword to the soul, write your heart out... Now! Do something, sing, dance, prance even, but do not stop. Living is a funny the experience a mock reality of all our tomorrows, we forget about the present. It is a miracle, all it's own. The light outside, bright full of sun, and yet there is... a dark side of the moon. We are dreaming, beaming... seaming to make sense... and not. Nothing, common... at all.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/14/2021 4:30:00 AM

As we say in the Lords prayer 'Give us this day our daily bread' - how do we know what is to happen to us tomorrow? Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Ann Foster
Date: 8/16/2021 2:02:00 PM

I am thrilled with getting through the now... tomorrow seems a bit too stressful... so... Flowers at your door, every day of the week my friend. If you were just a bit closer we would have tea, under the big tree and feed the wild birds, gophers and squirrels... A heron might even come to visit if we are lucky... Prayers for you ... and your family... Ann

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 8/10/2021 6:40:00 PM

I find the advice of living in the present to be sage advice. Today is a miracle. Let's make something happen today.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/16/2021 2:01:00 PM

We are surrounded by miracles... Prayer is so strong, and so many pass it by, without thought. It is our lifeline to the LORD... Have a truly blessed day. You are a wonderful poet. I enjoy your writing... Ann

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/2/2021 8:48:00 PM

Cool poem Ann! I like the part about making sense...or not.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/16/2021 2:00:00 PM

I live in such a nonsense world lately... funny... Ty ... I am so pleased you enjoyed the piece. God bless you... I love your work. You have flare... Ann

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/31/2021 1:43:00 PM

Such a fine poem, Ann. Thanks for writing it. None of no what the morrow will bring. But, as for me, I shall keep on "dreaming, beaming, seeming to make sense...and not" Great lines!

Ann Foster
Date: 8/16/2021 1:59:00 PM

So kind of you to stop by. Thank you for your words, they lift me to write another... Ann

David Mchattie

Date: 7/31/2021 12:00:00 PM

No one has a guarantee on tomorrow. Live for today but plan for tomorrow. If not to be... not to be. Leave nothing on the table. Excellent poem. One of the best I've read. Be well my friend.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/16/2021 1:58:00 PM

Sage and true my friend... your words about tomorrow... God bless you and thank you for stopping by. I love your work. Ann