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Drifting Aimlessly

Drifting aimlessly I have sipped the ladled blades in this cold chicken soup Set upon a table of just deserts on the far end of the horizon Spoon fed disappointments staining a multi-colored tie, hated for what it’s worth and only half as much for what it means Navigating a narrow hallway of slanted photographs, framed and fading Dripping down papered walls, torn designs, baseboard gatherings, stopping only for locked doors, weather worn carpets burning my hands and knees The spiral staircase teeters on its polished axis as I weave my way towards the furthest star, carbon copied desires on an unending page rolled and stuffed in my shirt pocket, mapping each pie slice step, counted and forgotten of crusted blueberry footprints…crumbs falling through celestial cracks, drifting aimlessly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/22/2018 1:43:00 PM
This journey of melancholy - simply excellent!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Michelle.
Date: 10/16/2018 3:29:00 PM
Sometimes we get lost in our topsy turvy world, Chris. Your imagery of faded photos, old wallpaper and weathered carpet easily transported me into your vision. I'm glad you're on the stairway and still climbing to the stars. I hope your mood has lightened. This is a fantastic portal to the doldrums we find ourselves in sometimes.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thanks so very much Lin. And doldrums, that describes perfectly how I was feeling today. When that hits me I always try to write it out of me, sometimes it works, sometimes not. Thanks again my friend, I appreciate your kindness always.
Date: 10/16/2018 11:54:00 AM
Eerie penning!!! xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 12:26:00 PM
Kind of the mood of the day. Thank you so much my friend.

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