Drift

Many distant sea shores Watch me silently As I am drifting through the sea There is no fear of drowning Uncertainty shakes me though To find the shore of happiness That's the thought I hold When this journey ends? The wait feels in vain Drowning is the easiest way Probably to eternal peace Pain won't exist and me neither Drifting through the sea My body gets sore And I travel from one Poem to another Without reaching the sea shore

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 9:24:00 PM

Nisim , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2014 4:01:00 AM

- Welcome to P - Soup, Nisim !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)