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As twilight's shifting shadows slowly merge, dusk extinguishes all lingering light. And a spray of twinkling stars lights the night; when the blackness of space and night converge. Indigo skies morph into ebony as a dying sun bleeds on snow-capped rocks. And time is tethered to inpatient clocks; that pause to behold this transcendency. A curtain of misty clouds starts to form, obscuring mountains behind veils of white. And darkness descends as eagles take flight over a landscape; that night will transform. Silence rebuffs the creatures of the dark; scurrying from the light of the full moon. And Luna rises like a gold doubloon; above a gnarled oak tree with gilded bark.

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Date: 5/9/2023 3:24:00 PM
Beautiful Emile! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/9/2023 3:37:00 PM
Thanks, Ann; as always, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2023 6:28:00 AM
A fabulous addition to Jo's poem Emile. A successful collaboration of skill and talent. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/9/2023 3:36:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, as always, your comments are a welcomed encouragement and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2023 9:48:00 AM
Truly a lovely collaboration Emile. Love the line "night will transform." Such a lovely view of the landscape transformed in darkness. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 5/2/2023 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2023 9:20:00 AM
A wonderful collab, breathtaking in its beauty. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/2/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2023 4:22:00 AM
Emile - A brilliant collaboration with Joanna, truly lovely. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
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Date: 5/2/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Belle, as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2023 1:17:00 AM
Very well done, Emile:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)
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Date: 5/2/2023 8:41:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate the placement, and your comments, your poem inspired my words, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2023 10:01:00 AM
Smooth collaboration Emile! Flowing with Nature's beauty. :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 2:51:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2023 4:27:00 AM
An exceedingly good piece Emile. The cohesion is excellent, I cant tell were Jo's leaves off and yours starts. The result is a beautiful poem.
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